Always love your writing. It's so full of emotions and descriptions - it's like you're there. And the dialogue feels genuine not forced or wrong. Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
Jared's mum really is totally clueless. Jared's not happy & she doesn't see it & David's a total "wanker" more concerned about what other people will think ( I think Jared's mum is also BTW ) that what Jared does . David needs to be " salt-n-burned" !!!!!!!! MUHAHAHAHA
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Looking forward fro more
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It's so full of emotions and descriptions - it's like you're there. And the dialogue feels genuine not forced or wrong.
Can't wait for more.
Thanks for sharing.
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