Comments | callmetofu: Fic: The Anatomy of Birds (Michael, Lincoln, AU)

callmetofu

Fic: The Anatomy of Birds (Michael, Lincoln, AU)

Aug 31, 2007 17:13

Title: The Anatomy of Birds (1/4)
Author: callmetofu
Beta: jules1013 and deadbeat_nymph
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not Mine
Characters: Michael, Lincoln, Mama Scofield
Category: Childhood Gen, angst, AU
Summary: Michael has wings.

( It was a Monday--no a Sunday--when Michael was born. )

Comments 9

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callmetofu August 31 2007, 21:52:39 UTC

Thank you. I know it's an odd little story. Thank you for giving it a chance.

tawabids September 1 2007, 01:33:00 UTC

What a curious and lovely little piece! I can't wait to read more, though it feels complete just the way it is now.

callmetofu September 1 2007, 01:38:03 UTC

I'm a slow writer (though part II is already finished aside from some editing), so I try to keep everything I post as self contained as possible rather than ending it on a cliffhanger.

Thank you for reading.

happywriter06 September 1 2007, 01:36:23 UTC

Michael has wings? Well, some say he does look like an angel.

Poor Linc.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

callmetofu September 1 2007, 01:42:07 UTC

Thank you for reading.

I guess I always wanted a better explanation for Michael and Lincoln's bond so I gave them a secret that they share. That and I thought Michael would look very cute with wings and it gives him a good opportunity to angst about something.

When asked I shall pretend that the wings are a metaphor for Michael's LLI and overall specialness.

wanton_erato September 1 2007, 17:32:10 UTC

Wow! This is just spectacularly beautiful and heartbreaking, and - I have to be honest - made me weep.

The use of this metaphor to convey Michael's ethereal quality is very powerful and convincing. And such a wonderfully original idea - congratulations! You really are a very talented writer.

The characterisation also strikes me as spot on.

And I just saw this is part 1 of 4. Can't wait for the rest! :)

callmetofu September 2 2007, 10:29:44 UTC

Glad I'm not the only one with a kink for winged Michael.

belle_mystic September 2 2007, 16:36:08 UTC

OMG, Michael with Wing. My dream come true.;)

Last Christmas I asked and Marilyn wrote me an Angel Michael with Wing.
I still love it very much. And still come back to read it many times.

Just want you to know that how happy I am reading your fic.

I love your writing very much too.

THANKS YOU VERY MUCH for writing. <3.