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jenrind in callie_arizona

Fanfic: Puzzle Pieces 1/?

May 17, 2015 17:07

Title: Puzzle Pieces 1 ( Read more... )

Comments 7

doggiedaze May 18 2015, 08:39:59 UTC

Very promising! I like it, their voices sound authentic. I love the play-off between Arizona and Amelia. I hope you have further chapters for us!

jenrind May 18 2015, 23:57:36 UTC

Thanks so much for the feedback. Dialogue is my favorite thing so I am glad you found it authentic. I definitely have a basic idea of what's coming next.

My point in adding Amelia for Arizona is that Amelia can give voice to Arizona's internal thoughts that we aren't normally privy to. She's a way in.

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jenrind May 19 2015, 04:33:49 UTC

Thanks so much! Amelia is a favorite. It's so much fun to write a character with no filter. I'm glad you liked it.

keri_leeg May 18 2015, 20:47:01 UTC

Oo I like this, very good start

jenrind May 18 2015, 23:57:49 UTC

Glad you like it!

mangomuumuu May 19 2015, 03:35:04 UTC

Oh, this is fun! Fantastic job. Look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.

jenrind May 19 2015, 04:34:26 UTC

Ahh, thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it. I feel like we need a bit of 'fun' again after this dark, dark season.