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FIC: The Beaver-Swan Date

Jun 27, 2011 17:10

The Beaver-Swan Date
Summary: Callie and Arizona try dating again.
Rating: R for language and implied situations
Disclaimer: If you recognize it I don't own it.
Author's note: I was a pre-vet/biology major in college who tossed around the idea of going to medical school as my back up plan. Unfortunately, chemistry became the bane of my existence and ( Read more... )

art: fanfiction, fanfic: callie/arizona

Comments 8

rowmil09 June 27 2011, 21:31:56 UTC

I'm liking this. Excited for more

pens_co927 June 28 2011, 02:02:43 UTC

thanks!

pandora_007 June 27 2011, 23:31:41 UTC

slowly but surely..

i didnt get the meaning of Callie staying with the stuffed beaver at the end..

pens_co927 June 28 2011, 01:56:40 UTC

i had this crazy notion to make the beaver their mascot (for lack of a better word atm) or personal messenger.

funkyshaz57 June 27 2011, 23:39:21 UTC

It was a good chapter, but I feel like it's kinda going off track slightly, it started off with them both being injured and Arizona feeling inadequate of Callie's love due to Callie's crap behaviour and everyone else treating her like nothing basically and it's gone to Arizona having to move out and not see her daughter as much. I haven't seen much resolvement while I realize that that is still probably to come their date did seem a bit pointless in a no offence way I mean the chapter was nice and light which was good....but I'd like to see them actually dealing with their problems....The marriage proposal, that Arizona took back...I mean I assume she still loves Callie, the baby, Mark...their relationship

lovecnqrsall June 28 2011, 01:51:09 UTC

I like this and I see where you're going....Arizona and Callie have lost touch a bit and really need to work to restablish it...but true, they still need to deal with reality....I wanna see mark actually do the right thing as well

pens_co927 June 28 2011, 02:01:12 UTC

I felt if they are going to date then they needed a date where they didn't have all the baggage. I was going for a first or second date kind of interaction. Callie has already been taken to task for not asking questions about Arizona's life and this showed her trying to learn more about her girlfriend. I'm working on the serious issues now so look for it either tonite or tommorow

lovecnqrsall June 28 2011, 02:26:04 UTC

love it. All coming together well.