Frenemies: A love (?) story

Dec 28, 2008 04:51

I wrote SHINee fanfic. Oh, boy.

Frenemies: A love (?) story )

shinee fic, shinee

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lovelysonata December 29 2008, 18:30:34 UTC
wow, this fic is very detailed, and presents a different side to the boys. i can't help but be irritated with the way key acts here. if i was with them i'd probably be like jonghyun and snap at key at the perfect moments. hahaha~XD
but as the story progresses, like jonghyun i could see the tender side to key:
Like how Key would automatically push the salt shaker on the kitchen table closer to Minho whenever they started a meal because they all knew Minho liked to eat everything oversalted to death. Like how one morning, he had stared at Jonghyun’s earlobe - infected and painful from the nickel in an ear stud - and snapped ‘you’re bleeding,’ and whipped out a tissue from his pocket and smushed it to Jonghyun’s ear. Or how he’d started carrying Onew’s wallet in his messenger bag for Onew since their leader would forget his own head if it wasn’t attached to his body.

he’d love to be in Super Junior, be the fourteenth member since he always thought having thirteen was unlucky
hahaha! this cracked me up for some reason. ^___^

i'm sorry for having a long comment but i can't resist quoting. i can't wait to see how their relationship will develop. ^_^

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callherblondie December 31 2008, 10:11:24 UTC
i can't help but be irritated with the way key acts here. if i was with them i'd probably be like jonghyun and snap at key at the perfect moments.
Yes, Key wants attention, especially from Jonghyun who isn't buying his crap. But Key also has a very caring side which I want to show as the story progresses.

And why does Super Junior have 13 members? Random number. ;)

Thank you so much for reading and feedbacking!

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