Comments | calleighanderic: The Miami Sofitel (12/?)

somewhereapart in calleighanderic

The Miami Sofitel (12/?)

Feb 22, 2009 01:59

Comments 12

Dina_Wizy anonymous February 22 2009, 09:18:22 UTC

I cried! Please, update, as soon as possible. B/c it shouldn't be angst!
Certainly, I can see this difference between Calleigh's night mood and her morning thoughts. And you are masterly show it! I need to see the way that they go over their first fight!

Certainly, you are very talented girl!

Re: Dina_Wizy somewhereapart February 22 2009, 17:39:12 UTC

Thanks! Keep reading to see how it turns out!

pirate_ellabean February 22 2009, 10:30:09 UTC

Oh wow, what to say to that?
That was brilliant; heart-wrenchingly painful but brilliant all the same.

I wish I could find the words to tell you how much I think of this chapter. I loved the contrasts in volume, tone and feeling between Eric and Calleigh, and on top of that, I love that you still managed to construct such a convincing argument.

This is a wonderful dosage of angst and I can't wait to see where you go with this.

somewhereapart February 22 2009, 17:39:56 UTC

Thanks so much! You've gotta throw a little conflict in every once in a while, right??

pirate_ellabean February 22 2009, 17:45:54 UTC

Certainly even if it does crush your readers a little bit! I'm kidding, as I said, I think this fight was wonderfully written.

As always, you're extremely welcome (:

somewhereapart February 22 2009, 17:52:03 UTC

I was so amused reading the comments to the last entry. Everyone was so hopeful, and I was sitting back thinking "Oh, just wait..." lol

heartagram_lala February 22 2009, 17:58:44 UTC

OUCH!!!

That chapter hurt!

I loved it though, they are both so vulnerable right now, and both need each other but also don't want to need someone they way they need each other.

Can't wait to see how this is resolved!

somewhereapart February 22 2009, 18:00:25 UTC

Thannks! Stay tuned!

sunhawk February 23 2009, 01:35:11 UTC

Every chapter posted, I love this story more but THIS was just so PERFECT!! In all its angst and hurt and denial ^_^

somewhereapart February 23 2009, 05:39:51 UTC

Thanks so much!

mandybennet February 23 2009, 02:11:54 UTC

yes this chapter hurt a little.

but i love it how you made their first fight like this. i thought it was brilliant :D

nice job.

PLEASEEEE UPDATE like right now??? hahahahha

somewhereapart February 23 2009, 05:40:57 UTC

Thanks! Glad ya liked it!

I think I'm going to focus on finishing this one up before I do any more work on my other WIP ("Tuck"), so hopefully there will be some more frequent updates over the coming week or two.