[fic] [swficathon] [SGA] You Might Need Somebody

Jan 15, 2008 14:10

Title: You Might Need Somebody
Fandom: SGA
Author: calleigh_j
Written for: claraon
Rating: G
Warnings/Spoilers: Set after 3.06 'The Real World'
Pairings: John/Elizabeth UST
Word Count: 1,618
Disclaimer: I own neither the characters nor the title
Summary: He worries about her
Feedback/Concrit: Is made of win and very much appreciated
Author's Note: claraon asked for an ( Read more... )

fic: sga, fic, fic: ficathons

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vickysg1 January 15 2008, 14:38:47 UTC
This is beautiful!

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driftingatdusk January 15 2008, 18:51:53 UTC
Oh, this is lovely! I love the way you continued the episode/hint at the aftermath it's left and show how supportive he can be to Elizabeth, too.

They walk in silence, strides synchronising so completely within a few steps that Elizabeth doesn’t think anyone listening would be able to tell that there was more than one person.

I absolutely adore that sentence - it rings very true with what we've seen of them walking together and is a lovely image to have.

As for the "you're important to the city, and you're important to me" line.... *loves very much*

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odakota_rose January 15 2008, 18:59:52 UTC
*happy sigh*
This is what I love about them, that they can have these quiet moments where it seems like everything they are gets condensed into a sweet scene like that. Loved it!

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ankareeda January 16 2008, 00:48:44 UTC
Beautifully written! ♥

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oparu January 16 2008, 02:36:11 UTC
YAY!!!!!!!

*dances around* This is lovely, dark and sweet at the same time. I love the UST and the 'I love you' that hangs underneath. Good work darling. *hugs*

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