Fic: Stuck

[calis_1st]

Title:  Stuck (in the metal with you)
Author:  Calis_1st
Rating: PG for language
Characters: Neal.  Heard only by Neal are Jones, Diana, Peter and Mozzie.
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: Rats are mentioned, but never, ever make an appearance.
Word Count: 1300

Summary:  You know those metal grates in some New York sidewalks?  The ones over the subway tracks

Comments

[winterstar95]

This is too funny! Really I love that you picked to do a dialogue fic but with only one side of the dialogue. That's perfect.

And look at me - three of my prompts were filled TODAY!! How lucky am I???? Thanks for making me feel special!

[calis_1st]

I'm glad you like it. And the style was inspired by a few of your fics, in fact. Was challenging, but fun. Thanks for your comment!

[kanarek13]

LOL! This is awesome. Poor Neal, of all the things that could happen to him... :D But, geeee, the group of ladies and Neal telling them to stay hydrated sounds awfully familiar :D :D :D Great one!

[calis_1st]

Hmmm, yeah, doesn't it? :) Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

[ultracape]

Oh, this was hysterical. I loved how Neal was still being so polite and charming during the whole thing. And "free health care for the mole people," oh poor Neal.

Really funny.

[calis_1st]

Thank you so much. He was probably channeling his inner Mozzie for the mole people.

Glad you liked it!

[rabidchild]

Too hysterical.ove the one-sided dialogue. Aw, poor baby, did no one bring him a bottle of water except Diana?

[calis_1st]

Awww, thank you!

[wpadmirer]

Oh, this was fun!

[calis_1st]

Thank you so much!