Wha... This story is incredible. Not only is it HOT as all Frak but the intensity is nearly unbearable. (that's a compliment:) I literally feel heartbroken that there isn't more, freaking cliffhanger! You must continue this semi-immediately and the comment above freaked me out! I have fic abandonment issues:) This is really well written. It is super hard to write suspense, delicious sexual tension and witty dialogue (love Hal, lol) in such an awesome and natural way and you have mastered it. I love the narrative too, the costumes and the setting, I totally picture a Modern Moulon Rouge or something... Anyways, enough rambling, you get the idea. You Rock! Keep writing:)
Thanks for the reviews. It was very hard to right this. The build up of angst...the sexual tension. It was slooooow. And I'm glad you like the setting. I love writing fics in a really cool setting, taking them out of their element, even when it comes to their clothes.
I don't plan on abandoning this. How quickly I will get it done is a different story. But I'm going to try not to drag my feet.
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Thank you so much for this update... i love this story... can't wait for the next chapter...
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I don't plan on abandoning this. How quickly I will get it done is a different story. But I'm going to try not to drag my feet.
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