Comments | calie15: Entanglements 1/1

calie15

Entanglements 1/1

Jan 16, 2010 01:27

Title: Entanglements 1/1
Fandom: Smallville
Summary: Spoilers for Disciple. If only you didn't need them.
Notes: This isn't connected Facing Fears, my other story based off of Disciple.
( Entanglements 1/1 )

ship: oliver/chloe, rating: g, fandom: smallville, fanfic, title: entanglements, one shot

Comments 11

slytherinpunk January 16 2010, 10:40:27 UTC

This was so perfect and amazing and everything I want and need "Disciple" to be. Those emotions were beautiful, and wonderfully told.

*totally gushing right now*

calie15 January 16 2010, 16:51:26 UTC

Thanks! I was trying to hold back a bit on the romance, heavier on the angst. Because if this does happen I'm sure we all assume it won't in Disciple. We'll have more hints of it then anything.

ladyhawke01 January 16 2010, 15:18:42 UTC

That was just...gush. If Disciple has anything like that..it would be awesome.

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calie15 January 16 2010, 17:47:24 UTC

I doubt we'll get anything close. But thanks for the review!

lynzie914 January 16 2010, 19:38:05 UTC

This was awesome!

calie15 January 16 2010, 19:52:11 UTC

Thanks! I had fun trying to write them being shippy, but not to much.

kc_2009 January 16 2010, 23:58:01 UTC

Beautiful. Somehow I'm glad that you stopped them from kissing (I can't believe I'm saying this!!!), but it made it more romantic this way, they know they have feelings for eachother, but they both know is not the time and is not that easy....