Facing Fears 1/1

[calie15]

Title: Facing Fears 1/1
Rating: PG
Summary: Spoilers for Disciple. Chloe confronts and comforts Oliver forcing him to face his greatest fears.
Notes: Spoilers for Disciple. Although I did make it up kind of on my own since I wasn't quite sure what was going to happen. I MIGHT write a follow up to this based on the most recent spoilers. ;) Thanks to

Comments

[slytherinpunk]

I really enjoyed this piece =) I liked how Chloe was kinda oblivious, and didn't even link Ollie's feelings to her, but to Mia.

I really liked the closeness, with Oliver's need to be near her, dealing with his inner turmoil of the repercussions of his actions and his relationship to her, so instead of kissing her he pulls away, wanting her to be safe above all else... And then Chloe pulling him back for a kiss =)

Awesome job!

[calie15]

Thanks! I just couldn't understand why it was Mia being kidnapped. I guess because Oliver will be her mentor and the Dark Archer was a mentor to Oliver? Who knows. And I didn't understand why Chloe and Lois weren't kidnapped, but they must have been targeted at some point. I mean were they more of a warning or did someone thwart the Dark Archer's attacks? LOL rant. Thanks for the review.

[kryptolori]

Ooo I really enjoyed this! I've said it before but your great with the angst, love Ollie's POV I always prefer it for some reason, fav part no susprise then end kiss *wink*

[calie15]

Oliver is my favorite point of view too. Maybe it's because I have a crush on him. =) Plus, I always like him having unrequited feelings for Chloe. As for the angst, thanks! I feel like when I'm writing I always have a bit of trouble escaping the angst.

[chlarks_cupid]

this was heartbreaking. If the episode doesnt go like this then i will be very unhappy. I love the angst you put into their speeched. This is something that those stipid SV writers should read!
great job! :)

[calie15]

I know, this poor two people really need to get together. The writers should be ashamed with themselves if they write someone else for them because anyone else just wouldn't be up to par. I mean Oliver admitted to the fact that she knows him and that they are alike. And even Dr. Emil made that comment one time about a reason Oliver likes her so much. Can't remember what it was exactly.

[chlarks_cupid]

yeah he said that Oliver finally found a MATCH for his confidence or something like that....aaaahhh they are the PERFECt match

[calie15]

That was it. I mean even the writers admit that they are similar and perfect for one another.

[kyra_and_co]

that was really good!! angsty at will and intense!!
Your (stubborn) Oliver is really touching and chloe is awesome as usual. the ending is perfect.
really well written, good job!!

[calie15]

Thanks! I didn't really want to go overboard with them coming together. It was more about Chloe being there for Oliver and helping him work through his issues.

[kc_2009]

Perfect!!!!
I seriously love how you write Oliver, with all his worries, his guilts and his feelings.. Great job!!! :)

[calie15]

Thanks! I've gotten a lot of compliments on how I write Oliver. I'm glad everyone thinks so. I do like writing him.