Comments | calie15: Finding Love 1/1

calie15

Finding Love 1/1

Nov 10, 2009 01:04

Title: Finding Love 1/1
Summary: Oliver's given a second chance at finding love, now he just needs to hold onto it.
Rating: PG
Notes: This is loosely based off of Lois' dreams from her trip to the future and the upcoming episode Pandora. But it isn't really spoilerish.

( Finding Love 1/1 )

ship: oliver/chloe, rating: pg, title: finding love, fandom: smallville, fanfic, one shot

Comments 26

soapfan101 November 10 2009, 07:42:20 UTC

OMG...one of your best...enjoyed the entire thing....

calie15 November 10 2009, 07:44:40 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you think it's one of my best. I've been wanting to write something about Lois' dream sequence. Plus, I've been wanting to do something a bit more serious, so I was able to combine it all into one.

soapfan101 November 10 2009, 07:47:37 UTC

You had me bit teary eyed...I am a hard nut to crack....lol...fave your story on ff.net...

calie15 November 10 2009, 07:49:06 UTC

Oh good. Lol. I wanted it to be a bit sad. But considering that I can't write a story without a happy ending that wasn't going to last long.

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cullchestergirl November 10 2009, 08:03:11 UTC

Omg that was so beautiful. I creid when Chloe died. Thank god it was only a dream. Hopefully Ollie will be able to protect her. Great fic.

smallvillefics November 10 2009, 08:30:57 UTC

So amazing. Loved the whole thing, start to finish. I agree its one of your best. Very original take.

calie15 November 10 2009, 08:36:21 UTC

Wow, I'm so glad that it's considered one of my best. I wasn't sure if I had written it very well. But everyone's compliments are really changing my mind.

calie15 November 10 2009, 08:35:37 UTC

There was no way I was killing Chloe. I only write happy endings. Thanks for the review!

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kryptolori November 10 2009, 09:30:48 UTC

Oh god that was so good, this is exactly how I would love to see it happen on the show are you reading my mind? lol fav part ''She smiled endearingly at him and he could already feel himself losing part of his heart to her. She wouldn’t leave him; she’d be there to the very end. Lois had been right, there was no way he couldn’t love someone like that.'' *sigh* I love it when Ollie comes to his senses

calie15 November 11 2009, 00:17:52 UTC

I loved that last part. I kind of stared at it for a bit before I got it. It took me forever to find an end point because nothing felt right, but that did.

maiel_alcinoe November 10 2009, 09:47:30 UTC

That was really good. Now if only tptb follow suit.

calie15 November 11 2009, 00:18:17 UTC

Yea, you are right. I wish they would. How many hints do we need to give?

_rejectreality_ November 10 2009, 12:18:29 UTC

That was great! I love it ;)

calie15 November 11 2009, 00:18:29 UTC

Thanks!