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calie15

The Fall 3/?

Aug 08, 2009 02:04

Title: The Fall 3/?
Fandom: Smallville
Rating: NC17
Summary: Somestimes even a hereo needs to be saved.
Notes: I just wanted to add that I'm so grateful for all the great feedback I've gotten for this story. I was a little unsure about it when I started it, but I guess I was wrong. Please keep up the rerviews, it help for motivation. I'd like to try to ( Read more... )

title: the fall, fanfic

Comments 8

kryptolori August 8 2009, 07:35:27 UTC

OMG Ollie is being a right jack ass, I agree with Chloe if the team risking their lives to save him isn't enough to pick himself up I don't know what will, Dying to find out. Chloe's new power, so cool I like that it's defensive, that will come in handy! Great update, looking forward to the next.

calie15 August 8 2009, 08:00:07 UTC

Well I kind of took that defensive thing from when Braniac attacked her. And of course someething will make Olvier get his shit together. I can't imagine what would happen. =)

cking1575 August 8 2009, 16:37:41 UTC

OMG! This is BRILLIANT!!!! Love where you are going with this...your portrayal of depression and the havoc it leaves in its wake is spot on!!! Great job with this...oh yeah and Chloe's new power WOW...just wow. Can't wait for the next update!

calie15 August 9 2009, 06:39:28 UTC

You know I donn't understand Oliver's guilt that they ahve predicted on the show, because it doesnt appear that he did anything wrong. But I've taken it and run with it. I'm glad you like Chloe's power. It seems a good transition from what she showed with Braniac. I'm thinking tommorrow for the next update hopefully.

lilmoochie August 9 2009, 03:21:32 UTC

Ohhhh boy....holy moses! What a ginormous Jerk, I can't wait to read what's next.

calie15 August 9 2009, 06:37:53 UTC

I know! He's such an ass! I'm going to have trouble writint him into a decent guy again!

kc_2009 August 9 2009, 08:44:00 UTC

I'm loving it!!
I really like how you are writing Oliver, even tough I don't feel happy about the dark path that the show is giving him, you are making a great job showing how he would behave, I feel it makes total sense given his history... he wouldn't just be back to nice/humble guy right away, there's lot of not solved issues in his life, and he just got to the point where he really has given up, and it can't be easy to fix what is broken inside him...
And I'm loving Chloe's new power too!! (all about empathy: cure people, and now protect people).

calie15 August 9 2009, 20:32:06 UTC

You know I didn't realize that whole empathy part of Chloe's powers. I'm glad you picked up on that. You know that whole downward spiral does seem never ending. I mean I think the only way he would bouonce back is if he realized he was a better person fighting crime, that he may still make some mistakes but that ultimately poor lives will be saved that way.