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calie15

Seeing Her 10/10

Jul 29, 2009 22:59

Title: Seeing Her 10/10
Category: Smallville
Rating: M
Summary: After an accident Chloe and Oliver get to know each other in a different way and Oliver finds himself really seeing Chloe for the first time.
Notes: It's a miracle, I finished. I am so glad I saw this through. And I think I am pretty satisfied with how it turned out. I always lag around ( Read more... )

ship: oliver/chloe, fandom: smallville, fanfic, rating: nc17, title: seeing her

Comments 7

kryptolori July 30 2009, 11:39:05 UTC

*sigh* again, I'm a sucker for happy endings and it doesn't get much better than a hot billionaire sweeping you off your feet. Great ending to a great story. One of my fav parts (well apart from the smutfest) was when Ollie was about to kiss her and her healing ability kicked back in, I just love that. I wish her healing ability came back on the show, might come in handy as WT. Looking forward to your next fic.

calie15 July 30 2009, 14:40:49 UTC

I'm currently racking my brain for something. Hopefull I cancome up with something today while I'm at work.

lilmoochie August 2 2009, 18:05:49 UTC

. “You’re all I want. I wouldn’t have gone through all this if I felt otherwise. Do you know how long I’ve waited for you?”

She wanted to say something I response, but as she looked up into his eyes and saw the intense desperation there she was speechless. Instead she did the only thing she could do, she kissed him.

From you to the writers'. Go team Chlollie. This was beautiful and funny and aweeee filled. Great Job!

cullenblaze October 31 2009, 18:37:09 UTC

just wanted to tell you that I really love your chlollie stories:-) they are soo great:-)

justbeyourself May 8 2011, 22:58:53 UTC

Still working through your stories! Wow you have lots! I absolutely love this story! I know part of the ways in you lost sight of this story. I think you did a great job picking up and reviving it towards the end ( ... )

calie15 May 9 2011, 01:47:43 UTC

My timeline might be a bit off. I really didn't start getting into Smallville until around season 8. Also, I agree, I did NOT like Jimmy. I can't recall exactly what Chloe said she told Jimmy in my story, but if it wasn't true to what happened on Smallville I may very well had just written it the way I wanted to ( ... )

justbeyourself May 9 2011, 02:26:43 UTC

Cool. I was one of those who made herself watch through this. AM might have liked them...but you can tell the dynamics between the two damn even the chemistry just was blah. I know Aaron is a great guy I just have always had a hard time getting him and Chloe. It wasn't the greatest match period...but oh well it happened, we survived it and we got what we wanted!

That last paragraph, thank you that was one thing I never did understand. I'm glad most re-write it or re-do. :D