Forgiveness 7/?

Jun 22, 2009 01:10


Title: Forgiveness 7/?
Author: Calie
Rating: M
Summary:Two people that have wronged each other and their friends will only find forgiveness with one another.
Notes: Note: I think this story is nearing its wrapping up point. I'm hoping to finish it in the next chapter unless something else hits me (which I don't think it will). Hope you enjoy it. Not ( Read more... )

ship: oliver/chloe, title: forgiveness, fandom: smallville, fanfic, rating: nc17

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miss_morrygan June 22 2009, 08:11:42 UTC
cool update, I could almost feel the tension between Clark and Chloe/Ollie. you should do some proof reading though, I think you missed some mistakes. other than that, it's been great!

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cking1575 June 22 2009, 13:42:57 UTC
DAH DAH DAHHHHH, That was awesome! I could totally feel the tension between Chloe and Clark and Oliver! I loved how Oliver wouldn't be pushed to the side and staked his claim! Amazing update! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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Re: calie15 June 22 2009, 14:06:45 UTC
Don't worry the oliver clark tension isn't over. I always get this feeling that if it ever really did happen for chloe and oliver that clark would have a problem.

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campbti June 22 2009, 18:23:37 UTC
That was nice. Clark is an Ass. At some point if Chloe ever wants to be happy she has to put that person in her life ahead of Clark, whomever it turns out to be. Love that you did that here, very nice. Love chollie. Can't wait to see how it ends up. And your Lois was good too, and I don't usually like her. =)

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ciastulek June 22 2009, 19:59:08 UTC
it was great! really. I have to confess, I've gotten a little twilighted lately, but you just pulled me back into chollie with you vivid writing! I loved it. Thank you so much! /grins/

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calie15 June 22 2009, 20:03:47 UTC
Oh yea. I think I got sucked in by twilight right before the fourth book came out. But I love my oliver chloe. I fall in love with a lot of ships but there aren't many I stay faithful to.

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her_who_is_me June 22 2009, 21:10:27 UTC
Great update! Glad to see that you are writing again. I'm still struggling desperately and hoping that reading updates will inspire me to write something too.

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calie15 June 22 2009, 21:13:15 UTC
Sometimes that's what I have to do, go back and reread all my favorite stories.

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