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calie15

Moving On 1/1

Jun 19, 2009 01:32

Title: Moving On 1/1
Author: Calie
Rating: K
Summary: Three months after the events of Doomsday Oliver comes back to Metropolis to see Chloe and put the past behind them.
Notes: This is just a one-shot. I wrote it in hopes of getting out of a writinng slump, but I'm not quite sure how much it helped since it took me a couple of weeks just to finish ( Read more... )

ship: oliver/chloe, rating: pg, title: moving on, fandom: smallville, fanfic

Comments 15

miss_morrygan June 19 2009, 10:12:08 UTC

omg that was awesome! so emotional and just perfect! I wish season 9 would be somewhat like that!

calie15 June 22 2009, 04:11:58 UTC

it should. it makes total since to me, but somehow i dont think the writers feel the same way.

miss_morrygan June 22 2009, 07:44:11 UTC

yeah it does indeed. well i hope they'll have better writers for the 9th season, caus every professional writer with some sense for suspense and a good storyline, would have put those 2 together ages ago...

shiverslala June 19 2009, 11:54:32 UTC

wow! incredibly sad and beautiful! great work

calie15 June 22 2009, 04:12:46 UTC

i dont usually like writing sad stuff (although it did end on a happier note), but i kind of couldn't help it. i mean chloe had lost everything.

campbti June 19 2009, 16:27:09 UTC

That was really good. There was a lot of emotion on all sides. LOVED LOIS and I rarely say that, but it was good. The way he admitted his feelings via how she felt for Clark was an interesting perspective. Liked the end, open ended but satisfying... Great work, now get back to writing some more!!! =)

her_who_is_me June 19 2009, 17:44:56 UTC

This was really good. I love the way you write Oliver. I hope this inspires you to continue writing. I'm in the same boat so I understand your frustration.

calie15 June 22 2009, 04:14:05 UTC

I always feel like Oliver should be a little 'crankier' or 'pissy' then i right him. I try for it, but it doesn't work. I kind of feel like I got it in this one.

As for writing, I want too and I open a chapter and try, but I'm just at a loss.

gen717 June 20 2009, 06:29:14 UTC

This is the first chance I've had to read any Chlollie fics, and I'm glad I started with this one. I think you've done a great job here! I'm still struggling with mine, and I'm glad you're continuing to write. I need a kick in the pants I think.. lol

calie15 June 22 2009, 04:15:21 UTC

I'm glad you got to read something you liked. Get out there and read some of the new stuff. Maybe it will inspire you. Let me know if you want some ideas or any help. If you get a chance take a look at my two WIP. I need a fire lit under me.