Rewriting the ILS Abstract

[calico_pye]

The original abstract is ok, but it looks as if I will have to combine some sentences - I thought I was developing an argument, but I can now clearly see where I am at risk of repeating myself. I am not sure just how long it will take, but as per usual I will do it by solidly plodding.

13:03I have spent over an hour trying to rewrite just one

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Re: whacky things

[calico_pye]

Hmm - my eyes are certainly crossed with all this concentration :-/