I like how this was different and seen from Spike's POV.
Also, this almost killed me because it is something Spike would actually do: You wonder if tanning beds are safe and plan to find a fledge to experiment.
very neat! very different! very Spike! we love him but the vamp is totally neurotic, lol, and his brain goes in directions we can only imagine (and write about) *g* great ficlet!
Liked this- particularly loved "loved" and "sought"- I thought they flowed well and had a good... intensity is the only word i can think of, a good build up. I thought the song was used well, and I loved the line 'Spike loved 'disturbing''.
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Great job.
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Also, this almost killed me because it is something Spike would actually do: You wonder if tanning beds are safe and plan to find a fledge to experiment.
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Great job on these! Loved that line the best.
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Great work!
Thank-you!
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