Fic: "One and Only" in 4 Ways

Oct 05, 2008 22:40


Title: One and Only
Pairing: Spike/Xander
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buffy the vampire slayer slash, fic, angel slash, challenges, spike/xander, fall for sx

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bmblbee October 6 2008, 08:43:10 UTC
Really interesting. Very different from the norm.
Great job.

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calcium_yeah October 6 2008, 22:40:55 UTC
Thanks, I fell all types of avant garde.

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devo79 October 6 2008, 12:25:13 UTC
I like how this was different and seen from Spike's POV.

Also, this almost killed me because it is something Spike would actually do: You wonder if tanning beds are safe and plan to find a fledge to experiment.

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calcium_yeah October 6 2008, 22:41:33 UTC
I can't believe he hasn't done it in canon. I figure it's only because he looks great without a tan.

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spikedluv October 6 2008, 12:38:46 UTC
And when he nods and it’ll be the most brilliant thing ever.

Great job on these! Loved that line the best.

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calcium_yeah October 6 2008, 22:42:34 UTC
Oh, thanks, but of course it made me realize that second "and" shouldn't be in there. But as long as it works for you the reader, I'm happy.

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kargrif October 6 2008, 12:44:33 UTC
very neat! very different! very Spike! we love him but the vamp is totally neurotic, lol, and his brain goes in directions we can only imagine (and write about) *g* great ficlet!

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calcium_yeah October 6 2008, 22:43:33 UTC
Yeah, Spike's a weirdo. I can't seem to write him unless he's full of low self esteem.

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mez_l October 7 2008, 06:16:44 UTC
Liked this- particularly loved "loved" and "sought"- I thought they flowed well and had a good... intensity is the only word i can think of, a good build up. I thought the song was used well, and I loved the line 'Spike loved 'disturbing''.

Great work!
Thank-you!

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