Security ... Fic

[caladria]

So - new ficcable thing that complete and utter S/J mush...

Tiny tiny spoiler for that one word in Line in the Sand

The smirking really should have given it away.

And the lack of comment - Jack was nothing but vocal in protesting about her working on their rare weekends together.

Their rare weekend spent continuously in each other’s company, anyway.

Comments

[ayiana]

Lovely, and sweet, and funny, and just so...them. Thanks for the smile. :)

[caladria]

Mission accomplished, then! Thanks - now I'm smiling too :)

[lilferret]

Did I ever tell you just HOW much I adore your fics? Yes? Well, get used to it.

LOL

It was pure Jack and Sam...VERY believable and wonderfully written. And this line was just so poignant. It took me a moment to realize what you were saying, but when I did it brought a tear!

"She looked at him. 'I am so glad that yours doesn’t have ‘I love you’ in it anymore.'"

Brilliant...

[caladria]

.... I can get used to that. ;D

Thank you - I aim to be believable, so being told I am is just asking for me to grin stupidly for the rest of the day.

[lilferret]

That's my goal as well, trying to write them as true to character. It's definitely difficult, given that just the relationship is enough to be out of character, since TPTB hate us...*pout*... But dialog is my goal, and you do it so nicely! :)

[caladria]

..And that's great.. cos when I started dialogue was THE difficult thing that I tried not to do... and the relationship, surely is IC in some circumstances...

[okelay]

awwww.how cute.

when i saw the ep and heard that line, i was pretty excited. it had to mean something. it's clearly not a coincidence.

so, well done, very good explanation.

i really loved it. especially seeing how jacksamless s10 has been, except for the scene in 200. which was absolutely fantastic, but it still sucks thats is so scarce.

[caladria]

I always figured that Sam had a long string of gibberish for a password - completely unbreakable... but of course, if Jack needs to get in there, too...

And living in hope for the last RDA appearance...

[odakota_rose]

That was so in character, I could see it just like it was an actual episode. Only a thousand times cooler because it's Sam/Jack hehe.

[caladria]

I live to be told I write in character... thanks!

[odakota_rose]

Well keep up the great work, you've definitely got them =D

[2_fish]

*giggles* I love those moments between the two of them! Great job! :)

[caladria]

Thankies!