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Jan 30, 2012 11:28

Went to his trailor to pick up DVD. Crunched through snow thinking what the fuck am I doing? Steps rickety. Though I have dropped him off many times I have never been invited in. First time through the doors. Though I still wasn't invited in. He answered the door looking nervous and sloppy in just a t-shirt and khakis. Never see him without layers ( Read more... )

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basric January 31 2012, 01:55:31 UTC
Interesting entry, I liked it. She was blunt with her thoughts, I like that.

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alien_infinity January 31 2012, 03:37:44 UTC
I loved the last line!

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rattsu January 31 2012, 18:33:35 UTC
Loved the cut and crumpled style of writing,it takes skill to make a short entry interesting and you did.

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notodette February 1 2012, 00:03:07 UTC
What a great entry and style.

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ellakite February 1 2012, 01:14:55 UTC
At least you tried.

I never have.

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