SPN Fanfic: Laundry Day 1/8

[caffienekitty]

Title:Laundry Day - 1/8
Characters: Sam, Dean
Classification: Humour, multi-part, gen
Rating: PG13? K+? Nothing that couldn't have been televised.
Warnings: None. Smatterings of spoilers for Season 1 episodes up to and including "Nightmare"
Word Count: 1079 words
Disclaimer: Strictly for fun, not for profit.
Timeline: Set between the Season 1

Comments

[girlfan1979]

Dean gone, Sam noticed the patrons of the busy laundromat had been watching the brothers with varying degrees of alarm and amusement. He grimaced and shrugged apologetically at them, then sat to wait while his laundry cavorted in the dryer.

I can just imagine the faces!

Also, cavorting is a good word for it. Laundry always does look so happy and free in those big dryers, doesn't it?

"Dude, seriously," said Dean, dropping the tinted underwear on the sorting table and hauling the rest of the load out of the dryer, "if you want to start a prank war, you should start smaller, 'coz it'll only get nasty from here."

Good tip. I'll bear that in mind.

The melted crayon on the shirt clearly spelled out, in big childish block capital letters, "HELP ME"

Awesome. And totally terrifying.

[caffienekitty]

I can just imagine the faces!

Also, cavorting is a good word for it. Laundry always does look so happy and free in those big dryers, doesn't it?

Ah yes, the playful socks, the frisky underwear...

Good tip. I'll bear that in mind.

*nodnod* I have never actually been in a prank war, but starting by making potentially embarassing alterations to someone's clothing struck me as an unwise starting point.

Awesome. And totally terrifying.

*glee*

[roseincognitus]

Awesome capture of their 'voice' and I love the wording, like the wet 'mangle' of laundry and the way the laundry 'cavorts' in the dryer. Excellent imagery!!
And omg...the dryer sobs?
On to part 2... :o)

[caffienekitty]

*grin* Missed this comment earlier. Thanks!

[nativestar]

Hee! Love the brotherly banter here. *runs off to part 2* :)

[caffienekitty]

Cool! This was one of the first things I wrote, and it always makes me smile when people like the banter. :-)

[charis_kalos]

Trust me, my underwear has a very select and appreciative audience. Oh, Dean!

Hey, I used to do my laundry in laundromats all the time when I was in a flat - how come I never saw Dean and Sam? Apart from them being fictional and me being in Australia?

[caffienekitty]

Yeah, the commute would have been a bit hard on the Impala. :-)

Heh, Dean and Sam driving around Australia would be pretty cool too. They could hunt something at Ayers Rock, maybe? :-)