FIC : Tie My Hands (7) : Swimmer Slash : pg15 (Phelps/Lochte)

[caelumi]

Title: Tie My Hands (7/?)
Pair: Phelps/Lochte
Rating: pg15
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.
A/N: Godbless leidy. Seriously. Editing is totally harder to do than writing, people.

THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS

Tie My Hands, Part 1: When Hilary Wants To Throw the

Comments

[leidy]

*takes drag* Was it as good for you as it was for me?

[caelumi]

*coughs* Totally was.

[smellyleaf]

I had a completely dramatic "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!" moment when Ryan caught MP and Erik.

OH, RYAN. MICHAEL NEEDS TO STOP TRIPPIN BECAUSE HE'S DOIN IT ALL OVER YOUR HEART AND IT MAKES ME VERY SAD. D:

I still love this though & want to see more. ♥

[caelumi]

It's funny how much the drama is lost when you edit, and edit, and edit. It's hard to think that other people will be caught off guard by it.

And Michael does. I'm in agreement. I never intended him to be such an asshole, lol.

<333

[24ko]

Okay, well screw Michael. Let's get some Cullen and Ryan up in here. Some Chocolochte as some like to call it. I support it.

[caelumi]

Some Chocolochte as some like to call it.

*dies laughing*

Come on! You need to give Michael a chance to redeem himself! (*cough*I'll have to write some Chocolochte elsewhere, just because... yeah. I support it, too.*cough*)

[tragycbeauty]

Okay I had a total "holy shit!" moment while reading the Eric and Mike part and then my roommates reminded me that I had groceries to put away, so now my fridge probably looks like a tornado hit it.
I love how you write everyone, especially Cullen and PVK. And Garrett. Oh Garrett <3

Okay wow I can't wait for how the shit is going to hit the fan, it's going to be so awesome and terrible and great.

[caelumi]

<3333 Sorry for the state of your fridge, hehehe. I'm glad that the other guys are turning out well. But poor Garrett. Sometimes I just feel like I'm only making fun of him. ^_______^

[tragycbeauty]

Haha, you're definitely not the only one making fun of him. He's precious, but... lord that boy is kind of a mess sometimes.
Exhibit A: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7Dmw8L0scQ
Oh Garrett, I love you, but no.

[caelumi]

Hahahahaha! (And is it just me or did he kinda sounds like Lochte there, too?)

[sexy_cheetah]

NGL, I wanted Ryan to have a revenge fuck with either Matt or Cullen. Screw Mike, you don't need him!

PS Yay Ben!!!

[caelumi]

I prefer Matt, but I wouldn't get your hopes up either way. ^^ Ryan loves Mike! They'll get there!