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FIC : Tie My Hands (6) : Swimmer Slash : nc17 (Phelps/Lochte)

Jan 25, 2009 22:35

Title: Tie My Hands (6/?)
Pair: Phelps/Lochte
Rating: nc17 for the smutty goodness
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.
A/N: I know that Ryan more or less recently announced his intent to drop the 400 IM. I also know that, according to Brendan Hansen, Ian ( Read more... )

swimmer slash, tie my hands

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24ko January 26 2009, 04:40:19 UTC

First and foremost, this is amazing. I'm just wowed at the way you can write from Michael's point-of-view. And it's sad because when it's from Ryan's perspective I feel awful for him, but then from Michael's I almost try to justify it. He's still as ass, but eh. Your writing is very persuasive.

Second! Your Aaron is perfect! Please, please, please do something with his character. Please? :<

Third. Knee biting! Was that anyway connected back to the phone conversation he and Ryan had that one time or just a nice coincidence?

I've written a lot, I'm just going to stop now. :)

caelumi January 27 2009, 02:26:55 UTC

One) Yay! I'm glad to know--seriously glad--that even though MP's an ass, the reader can understand why he's doing it, at least. It's all fear, baby. Scared of love. ^_^

Two) ^_____________^ I'm thinking about it. Any specific pairing you want to see?

Three) I think it was me just, like... recyling. ^^ But we can say that it was MP being conditioned by Ryan. *nodnod* Sexual conditioning.

24ko January 27 2009, 02:32:46 UTC

I think tragycbeauty and I are both on the Aaron/Ian bandwagon, haha. But you know, Aaron's a versatile character...

caelumi January 27 2009, 02:44:37 UTC

I'm still unsure of my Ian. All that making monkies see Zen... totally more easily said than written.

24ko January 27 2009, 03:30:49 UTC

Haha, I'm sure you would do a wonderful job! If you ever need any inside information, however, I'm pretty good at creeping around his Facebook... (I'm really not as sketchy as I seem.)

caelumi January 27 2009, 16:54:23 UTC

Haha! I call stalker! *points!points!*

^____^

It's more like all the Ian-input I've had has been written word, blogs, articles, etc. It's hard to get a feel for a guy when you don't actually see him, hear him. Yanno? Funny that as a writer, I don't trust words. Maybe I don't trust them -because- I'm a writer, lol

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