[Fiction] "Akira" [Reita x Ruki] - Oneshot

Jul 25, 2011 03:32

Title:  “Akira”

Author:  cadaver_maxx

Chapter: Oneshot

Rating: G

Warnings: one use of the “f” word

Pairing: Hm… Reita x Ruki, for the hell of it
Summary: “Eight years. Eight years since he picked up the still slightly warm piece of coal and he set it on the back cover of the book to try and portray what he saw. Also, three years. Three years ( Read more... )

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painted_bowlers July 26 2011, 22:58:40 UTC
I'm pissed off. Lj messed up with posting my comment (which I've been trying to post since you put this up ^^) I'm now commenting on my phone so I'll be riddled with typos but whatever.

If this is the product of ranting and way too many photographs of Reita, I think it needs to happen more often.

I love the originality of this. Where you've shown Ruki having a more unconventional way of becoming involved with art. I love how you started it with him using the most basic way of drawing and developing from there. Rather than him being amazing straight off the bat.

'How does one draw hair? Well random lines should do. He laughed. He got so obsessed over a dream, that he started drawing it. He shook his head and drew and arrow pointing the lines representing hair, writing "blonde and spikey" at the end of it.'

Much love to that. ...most of the people in my Life Class would do that when we were too lazy to actually bother doing our work ^^;;

I do like how you mislead people from the beginning because it would be expected that Ruki would meet this 'Akira' but you throw it into a spin and come up with a completely different ending.

I think it gives it an eerie yet heartwarming feel. If that makes sense.

So yeah... I really like it ^_^

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cadaver_maxx August 2 2011, 13:55:40 UTC
Thank you for being my muse!
Thank you for staying with me while I typed this, thank you for spamming me with Reita pictures. Thank you for being you, thank you for being my friend.
Thank you for existing!
I love you so much!

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painted_bowlers August 2 2011, 14:02:28 UTC
.////. meep.

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