WELCOME - Prompts Post Part I

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Welcome everybody. How you got here I have no idea but thank you for coming and welcome again, nonetheless . As you may have gathered this is a fic

Comments

OP

[anonymous]

Ohhhh, Rory bites - nice!! :D

In all seriousness, I love this - you're doing brilliantly.
There is so much I love about this fic and there's only been two parts.
Alright - let's start from the top:

- Carolyn's slight madness, adore it. Very in character and VERY scary :)

- Rory, completely in character in my opinion and as such, VERY endearing. I love how concerned he is about Martin an - ahhh, I just love him

- Martin, as always, I adore him. Working away in the portakabin nonstop (getting no appreciation by the looks of it, so - business as normal :D) And starving...and almost out of his flat and...suffice it to say that you're hitting all my buttons

- As for Douglas, very in character (I say that a lot I know, but it's a good thing) I hope him and Rory begin to get on eventually, but I can see how their different relationships with Martin would clash initially. Very believable.

- I also like the subtle difference between Martin and Rory, - gives them both a little more depth you know :)

Any way, if you haven't worked it out yet, I LOVE IT and am very eagerly awaiting an update.
Well done on a fantastic fic so far and thank you so much for filling my prompt :)

Re: OP

[oxfordtweed]

You'll be pleased to know that I have the next part ready to post. Except for one bit of dialogue from Douglas, which is waiting on my little_details post, which I wrote days ago, to actually be put up. D:

I was very nervous about putting Rory and Martin in the same fic, but as I started playing around with them, I realised that while Rory is a rather sweet person, he's also a lot more confident than Martin, and I think that goes a long way toward differentiating them. So, I'm very glad that those differences are coming across!