FMA| Human

Nov 18, 2012 17:13

We prove to each other we are both human now

[“All that I am asking for”, Lifehouse]

Ed’s muscles snap, moving almost on their own accord, his heart thumping in his ears as he rushes forward, arms open wide, back straight, because he is not going to let Roy- beautiful, powerful, broken Roy- be hurt. Because if there’s someone who’s disposable it’s ( Read more... )

fma character: ed, genre: future!fic, genre: angst, fandom: fma, fma character: roy, genre: au, genre: romance, rating: r

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tierfal November 19 2012, 01:00:27 UTC
he is not going to let Roy- beautiful, powerful, broken Roy
Oh, dear, you've already stabbed me in the heart in the best possible way. .___.

the ghosts of Ishbal flicking around his ankles
I LOVE this! ♥

And he has seen it, oh so many times, painted gray on motionless bodies, written on broken limbs and burnt corpses. To see it smudging the contours of Ed’s eyes, though, is something different.
Oh, my GOD, you just write so beautifully. I'm going to have to hold back so that I don't quote every single line of your own fic at you; so far I desperately want to.

The ride to the hospital is a blur of buildings and lampposts and flashes of golden hair and smooth warm skin.
Gah, this is gorgeous, too! And I love the running theme you've got going, where the focus is so often on hands and skin and the colors of them and aahhhhhhh ♥

that he doesn’t want to wait, that he can’t, because he has spent years waiting, buried under the snow and a grief so big that it’s a miracle his bones didn’t shatter underneath it.
I can only muster Tumblr articulation: help I'm having feelings - this whole paragraph is amazing.

Splinters of images flitter around him, confused, pale skin and pitch black eyes, firm lips and words piled up, left unsaid. Because they have never tried to give a name to the rumbling need that made them fall into a bed together for the first time or the sparking connection that kept them tied, despite the darkness of their memories, despite everything.
Cate you are killing me with these feelingsssssss; this is all just so beautiful.

because at every corner he turns he hopes and hopes but nothing happens
Holy hell, you are incredible. I want to sit people down and make them read this, because you don't use fancy words, or long words; you use the right words, and they make a huge impact.

so he simply slides his fingers between Roy’s and holds on.
Continuing with the hand thing! I love that they almost don't need words, but they're both just a little bit too damaged to believe in the physical signals alone. ♥

I love that of course Al probably knew all along. XD

Gahhhhhh this is so wonderful ♥

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