death note/ What you can't see

[ca_te]

 

Comments

[rinhail]

You really do this couple its rightful justice, even when the plot isn't necessarily canon. I only found one mis-spelled word, and just a letter. In this sentence: He had bought him a Chinese game, Tangram, considering that since they were little Near had always had a weak point for puzzle, but Neat had not played with it yet, your fingers hit the 'T' instead of 'R'. Just the smallest, minute mishap - not even really worth mentioning, but I have. ^.^;

Anyway, lovely story as usual. :)

[ca_te]

oh thank you! I'm really happy you think so! ^___^

also thanks for pointing out the mistake, I'm going to correct it right now :)

[kurosaki_akane]

This was very sweet. I love how intimate the whole moment feels, with Mello stroking Near's hair in silence. The mental images of them reaching such a point when they are so comfortable and somehow affectionate with each other... it's so priceless!

Thank you very much for writing and sharing this.

[ca_te]

Oh thank you! ^___^ I'm really glad that you liked this!

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

[ca_te]

Ah I'm happy that you liked that image ^___^ And well above all I'm happpy that you liked this present which is nothing if compared to your parel :3 And thank you <3