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{ONESHOT} Bite Me /~the beta-ed version

Nov 03, 2008 17:05

Title: Bite Me
Pairing: YooSu
Kink: Rough Sex (and maybe slight BDSM, I think it's a pretty softcore smut though XD)
Summary: It's Halloween and everyone is searching for a monster to hook up with. Only Junsu's monster just might be the real thing.
Warning: nc17 smut, babies. don't like, don't read.

( Then it happened, teeth sunk sharply into his jugular and it felt as if the ache in him had been fulfilled. It burst out in satisfaction and made Junsu arch his back, pressing every bone in his body against Yoochun's slick frame, sweaty and tired as he shook from his climax. )

oneshot

Comments 91

morninglory17 November 4 2008, 03:42:04 UTC

I think Junsu got brainwashed. I think Yoochun spied him out and put a spell on him. I don't like it. I don't like wimpy Junsu.
nghh

c_h_i_b_i November 4 2008, 05:17:47 UTC

lol, that's exactly what happened. xD cause it was a halloween oneshot i tried to make it a little creepy ... junsu was forced to say all those weird things, he was lured into by yoochun's "spell" and in the end he was forced to become yoochun's xD but the spell went on and off, showing that su wanted it just as bad himself LOL. i wouldn't call him wimpy XD just incredibly horny and willing to do anything to get release... that side of him came out thanks to chun's looks. -shrugs-

*looks at what she wrote*

....i have too much time on my hands?

tinseltown16 November 4 2008, 07:59:03 UTC

woah.... *incoherent* ...... *.*

c_h_i_b_i November 4 2008, 10:51:10 UTC

that's a good thing right? D8

tinseltown16 November 4 2008, 11:41:03 UTC

yeah... i think... *still incoherent.blinks* O.O XDDDD

<33333333

sweetkyuubi November 6 2011, 03:22:00 UTC

If she's like me then don't worry, It's great,... *_*
won't you make a continuation of this? please~ I want to know Junsu's reaction when he recovers his senses... (some more than me :p)
great fic~! Keep up the mervellous hard work! :3

padmik November 5 2008, 04:41:34 UTC

whooooooaa

whoa whoa whoa -flails-

That. Was. Awesome! I love vamp!Chun... Uggh, that was... just too good. Total twist.

c_h_i_b_i November 5 2008, 14:53:47 UTC

You. Are. Awesome! this is just what i needed after a long day of school XD now i can go to bed happy ^^ -huggles- <333

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c_h_i_b_i November 30 2008, 12:48:39 UTC

aish, i love you bb~ i would write even if you were my only reader 8DDD and about the smut... i'm crying from joy. LOL. my goal is to write perfectly good smuts before i turn 20. i only have 3,5 years left TT.TT

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c_h_i_b_i December 7 2008, 12:29:53 UTC

aw, I do that too sometimes!!!! <333 Let's get creepy togethar!!! 8DD XD o.o *huggles* thanks so much for the comment! ^.^