Comments | c0nvolution: So this is the new year... C/C round out 2005.

c0nvolution

So this is the new year... C/C round out 2005.

Dec 31, 2005 23:45

By c0nvolution

Crazy time and tense shifts; be warned. I tried to state the year in each little ‘flashback’ to try and make it as easy to follow as possible. Hopefully it’s not TOO confusing. Also, my dates might be wrong… This fic assumes that the TriWizard tournament took place in 1994-1995.

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xlucy_intheskyx January 1 2006, 08:58:32 UTC

That was an amazing piece! I love the twist, and that letter at the ended made it perfect. Great job.

And wow, to hear Cedric say, "Shut up and kiss me", well, now that makes my dreams come true. Haha.

Once again, fantastic!

c0nvolution January 1 2006, 18:50:38 UTC

=D Thank you for reading and commenting! Yeah, that "Shut up and kiss me" line was definately the product of a deep, dark fantasy of mine... ;)

haahuilija January 1 2006, 16:13:42 UTC

Awwwh. That was a beautiful fic! And I loved that you had included the Mirror of Erised. :) It makes sense to everything. I also have to admit that I'm a big lover of flashbacks! Just..incredibly wonderful, I loved this fic. Thanks, you made my day with it!

c0nvolution January 1 2006, 18:51:10 UTC

=) Thank you so much for reading commenting! Glad it made your day <3

allthingsgood January 1 2006, 17:48:14 UTC

Oh god, that was beautiful. I love the shifting in time and how everything was connected in some way. The dialogue was so great and I just LOVED it. Great job, babe.

c0nvolution January 1 2006, 18:52:58 UTC

*beams* Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. =)

boocast January 1 2006, 17:50:48 UTC

Oh, that was fantastic. I did get a little confused by the dates, but I'm just slow like that. Haha.
Poor Cho. :( I didn't really sympathize that much for her in OoTP, but something like this definitely elicits empathy for her.
Nice work!

c0nvolution January 1 2006, 18:57:44 UTC

lol, Sorry about the confusing dates! Maybe this will clear it up:

I assumed the TriWizard tournament was from September 1994 - June 1995.
Cedric was in his 6th year, Cho in her 5th.
The first task was around November of 1994.
Yule Ball - December, 1994.
Second task - February, 1995.
Third task- June, 1995.

I just made it so that in 1993, Cho was made seeker of the Ravenclaw team.

Glad this opened you up more to Cho's character! I feel like there's such a depth to her and her relationship with Cedric that we never really see because we only read about her through Harry's point of view...

Thank you for reading and commenting! =)

iateaburgerrrrr January 1 2006, 22:29:13 UTC

GAHHH YESSSSSS! Omfg. Yes. This was fjkasjkflsajdja so WONDERFUL. Thank you, thank you so much for writing this. Augh. :D

c0nvolution January 2 2006, 00:09:58 UTC

:D Glad you liked it!!