#26: fic: untitled office AU, PG

Feb 19, 2010 18:01

Title: Untitled Office AU
Fandom: Arashi
Pairing: Nino/Jun
Rating: PG
Summary: The first time Jun met Ninomiya, he was using the eighth-floor Risograph to print two hundred and seventy-six copies of a very officious-looking DANGER sign.
Disclaimer: All not mine.
Notes: Thank you forochel for looking this through and suggesting things! This is for darong, who ( Read more... )

.writing, rating: pg, fic: arashi

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oviparous February 19 2010, 10:19:14 UTC
awwwww this was so cute.

i enjoyed the setting, and the dialogue and the deatils of the office. ohno's paper-carving. lol. win. and jun is being his usual neurotic, i-love-my-senpai self. sho is amazingly stiff, just as how i'd imagine him as a boss. nino is eloquently adorable. he's hilarious. and aiba? genius.

love that bit about 'storm throughout the world'. and the post-it on it. hahaha.

fabulous ;)

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__sine February 21 2010, 05:14:38 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had quite a lot of fun writing in those details, so it's lovely to have you point them out. Thank you for reading! ♥

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__sine February 21 2010, 05:15:00 UTC
Thank you for reading! :D

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saana_13 February 19 2010, 10:38:56 UTC
I'm not really fond of Matsumiya but it seemed intresting and it was more than that! It was hilarious! I laughed a lot at it. Congrats:)

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__sine February 21 2010, 05:15:49 UTC
Strangely enough, I've never been a huge Matsumiya shipper either! :D Thanks very much for reading; I'm glad it made you laugh.

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reverseorder February 19 2010, 10:43:24 UTC
This is just... well, I finished it, then scrolled back to the beginning and read it again. The dialogue, and Nino the quasi-stalker, and 'secret passageways', and danger signs for the toilet doors (it might not be inspired, Nino, but I still want to try it). I also love how Sho always ends up in middle management in office AUs.

This made my night. Your Arashi need to work in my office : )

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__sine February 21 2010, 05:24:16 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! :D Writing the dialogue was one of my favourite things, so it's great that it worked for you. :D IKR, it's like an unwritten rule.

Thank you for reading! And I share your sentiments, except that the word 'work' might have to be applied very loosely in the case of these five.

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katmillia February 19 2010, 10:51:11 UTC
Okay well be prepared for some serious, serious fan-girling from me because this MADE MY NIGHT at work when I saw it. I have such a fondness for office!AUs and this was just- GUUUUUHHH. From Ohno's little artistic endeavors around their office, to the ABSOLUTELY hilarious tidbit about Sho refusing to admit defeat to an air-conditioner and wearing gloves and winter clothing, when I actually laughed out loud and might have woken people up, this entire thing was an absolute joy to read. The "endless vortex of despair" thing was just priceless; as was Jun's endless exasperation at Nino's courtship. I LOVE this entire thing, right down to the AU you've crafted around their personalities. :) :)

I would write more, but I'm pretty obviously FANGIRL gushing by this point, and it's a bit embarrassing. A bit.

♥ ♥ ♥

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jackie February 19 2010, 14:45:40 UTC
Ditto. :D

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__sine February 21 2010, 14:07:26 UTC
I am so thrilled that you enjoyed this, to the extent of mentioning the bits that you liked (and thus validating my inclusion of those weird little details). Thank you for reading, and leaving such a lovely comment! :D



--- Rather coincidentally, I recced The Lost to a friend of mine who's not an Arashi fan, and she is reading it right now and occasionally popping up to ask things like "ARE OS AND NK OHNO AND NINO". I thought I would just mention this, as well as the fact that months after, I still cannot actually get over your story - a re-read is in order!

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katmillia February 21 2010, 15:14:55 UTC
♥ ♥ !!! (after we got on fandom!secrets, I got a comment at the end from someone who has no idea who Arashi is and read the whole thing anyway, I almost died, thank you sweetie~~) ♥

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