#31: fic: The One Where Ray Person Time Travels, R

May 04, 2010 00:17

Title: The One Where Ray Person Time Travels
Fandom: Generation Kill
Pairing: Ray, Brad - Gen
Rating: R for language
Disclaimer: The characters here are based on those portrayed in HBO's fictionalised mini-series.
Word count: 4,500
Summary: Sort-of crossover with this. It was like having asthma, excluding the nudity, brushes with the law, and being ( Read more... )

.writing, character: ray person, fic: generation kill, rating: r

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I LOVE YOU LONG TIME forochel May 3 2010, 16:19:33 UTC
I PLAN LIKE A STRATEGIC MOTHERFUCKER, OKAY. LIKE SUN ZI. OR SOMETHING.

because, you know - ok wtf I'M JUST GOING TO REPEAT MYSELF. SO I MAY AS WELL C&P OUR CHATS:

me: the problem with me getting blow by blows of your fic like this
is that when you POST THE WHOLE THING
I have nothing left to say
you: hahahahahahah
me: other than OMG YAY *SEAL CLAPS *

okay now for epikery:

me: also
awwww Walt sleeping in the wrong grave again
22:46
<3 <3 <3
IT'S ALL PART OF HIS PLAN TO SEDUCE YOU, RAYRAY
oh god
oh my god
I have to write that
like
now
the sneaky seduction of the right hon. ray person by one (1) messr. walter hasser, or maybe the honorifics should be the other way aroundthe first time ray finds walt in his grave (which, really, _what_) is in afghanistan. they're in the same platoon, different teams, so it's a bit of a stretch as to how walt managed to roll his sunkissed baby of unicorns ass from there to here, to wit: ray's fucking grave. granted, walt grew up in the mountains or some shit like that, but ray's pretty sure the ( ... )

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Re: I LOVE YOU LONG TIME meeks00 May 3 2010, 23:32:25 UTC
I re-read this because you shared it in a public space and my stupid G-chat didn't save it and I missed it and it made me happy! It's like I got a two-fer in __sine's fic ;) And also, have I mentioned that I got really excited that you shared this tidbit and then chatted about it because I feared I lost you forever to ICE SKATING (it's ice skating, yes?).

walt blinks at him slowly and then he scrunches his nose and rubs the grit from sleep and the bloody rock and tallus around them out of his eyes.
"sorry," he mumbles, and clambers out of the grave.
there have been very few times in ray's life when he has been completely speechless; this is one of them.
I want to cuddle this image. Sleeping boys is my soft spot. Also cooking boys. No surprises here, eh?

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Re: I LOVE YOU LONG TIME forochel May 4 2010, 02:01:53 UTC
man, Gchat does shitty things like that. :C lots of the time it tells me it ate my messages when it actually didn't! also, awwwww meeks I'm really touched. esp since currently you're more in danger of losing me to work. ;A;

nsldkjglkjes somewhere on the outskirts of some godforsaken town Ray comes back from whacking off on the other side of a berm to find Walt in his grave, again. he stares down at Walt, who's curled up (insomuch as one may curl up in a lozenge-shaped hole in the ground) in his MOPP suit, knees slightly bent and one arm curved as if in protection over his head. Walt's breathing lightly; Ray could wake him up probably just by staring at him hard enough, but he decides not to kick up a fuss this time, and heads over to Walt's grave. at least they're in the same fucking team now.

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Re: I LOVE YOU LONG TIME __sine May 5 2010, 13:40:36 UTC
(insomuch as one may curl up in a lozenge-shaped hole in the ground)

especially loved this line. ♥

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laiqualaurelote May 3 2010, 16:52:09 UTC
OH MY GOD I WILL COMMENT ON THIS AGAIN WHEN I AM COHERENT.

IT IS YOUR FAULT IF I NEVER FINISH THE REHEARSAL SCHEDULE.

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__sine May 5 2010, 13:43:30 UTC
♥♥♥

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arueh May 3 2010, 17:18:06 UTC
OMFG. This is hilarious and so much fun to read :DDDD. I love the idea of a timetravel!Ray and how he deal with it is just so Ray~Oh and I couldn't stop laughing at Ray and Brad exchange when Ray time-traveled back and meet young!Brad *g*. That's some crazy and messed up shit that only could happen to Ray xDDDD.

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__sine May 5 2010, 13:55:59 UTC
Thank you for such a lovely comment! I'm glad you liked the notion of Ray time travelling. :) Young!Brad versus Ray was very fun to write. Thank you for reading!

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strawi May 3 2010, 19:06:29 UTC
so it became slightly confusing at times, but I'm a wierd person and like that.
(and Ray so wants to be Brad's soulmate :3 )
very awesome story, Brad was so supportive and awesome and Ray was funny and AWESOME, and I wish I had bigger and prettier words. Let's just say that I relly hope to see more of you in the fandom? :D <3

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__sine May 5 2010, 13:56:47 UTC
I'm sorry it was rather confusing! Though I'm so glad you enjoyed it despite that. Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment! ♥

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marvolos May 3 2010, 19:18:06 UTC
"It could be worse," offered Brad, "you could have travelled to Trombley's childhood." That line got me good. XD

I haven't read that book since the ninth grade, but this is every bit as enthralling as I remember the real thing being! It's such an awesome AU idea, guh. Love it! Thank you so much for sharing!

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__sine May 5 2010, 13:58:19 UTC
but this is every bit as enthralling as I remember the real thing being

!!!

I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this! :) It's been a while since I read the book too. Thank you for reading, and for leaving such a lovely comment. ♥

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