Comments | byeolbyeol: it's systematic, it's hydromatic (sooyoung/yoona)

byeolbyeol

it's systematic, it's hydromatic (sooyoung/yoona)

Jan 22, 2013 21:02

it's systematic, it's hydromatic
sooyoung/yoona; pg-13; 4,411 words
high school au

( what a double whammy. )

one shot, au, r: pg-13, g: snsd, hs au, ☆: sooyoung/yoona

Comments 10

bazza212 January 23 2013, 08:40:41 UTC

Ahhhh, so sweet and cute! Im Yoona has some admirable life goals to be sure.

I am only a little ashamed that I understood every grease reference too.

byeolbyeol June 4 2013, 01:53:13 UTC

don't be ashamed! i sometimes get a little crazy with references but i tried to keep it to a minimum (i know, i failed a bit there though) to keep anyone from being too thrown off.

thank you for reading though! â¡â¡

m0llayo January 23 2013, 12:32:49 UTC

this is so so lovely! your writing is killer here, and you really have captured sooyoung and yoona perfectly. the parts about siwon killed me and yeah. this is a perfect romantic comedy that now i kind of want to see in a movie tbh?

byeolbyeol June 4 2013, 01:54:10 UTC

....... please, don't make me blush. â¡â¡â¡â¡

i put the siwon parts in there specifically for your amusement, of course but, god. a movie??? maybe a cw drama could work too.

boxxsaltz January 24 2013, 22:04:08 UTC

Hahaha freaking perfect! The musical theatre nerd part of me was very pleased that you made Grease all the more enjoyable than I have ever found it.

I dig Yoona's mind. It's hilarious and flows off her well. Sooyoung doesn't even say much but her presence is all over the place and I loved the contrast between Yoona's thoughts on her and then Sooyoung as a character.

I think I have come to like SooNa that much more :)

byeolbyeol June 4 2013, 01:56:07 UTC

hey, i'm glad that you enjoyed that aspect of it somehow, man. â¡â¡

thank you! i know that yoona and sooyoung both have really big personalities, in completely different ways, but i figured if i had both of them ricocheting what they felt off of the walls or booming out their opinions constantly, it'd get a little bit overwhelming~.

wah, i'm glad! â¡â¡

g_odalisque13 January 26 2013, 02:24:02 UTC

this was so cute!
i loved yoona's inner thoughts so so much
and lmao at her thinking that changmin was a murderer XD
i loved this ♥

byeolbyeol June 4 2013, 01:56:41 UTC

it's difficult. changmin's so hard to read at times, i'd be a little afraid if i were yoona too.

thank you. ♡♡♡♡

staygame February 1 2013, 20:01:31 UTC

THIS IS SO GREAT. i love the soona dynamic and the setting and all of your wonderful writing ♥

byeolbyeol June 4 2013, 01:57:07 UTC

nooooooooo. thank YOU FOR READING IT. you're such a sweetie. ;__; ♡♡