This fic is dedicated to the stunningly wonderful Minerva Solo aka MsSolo aka minervasolo. It is slightly too late for her birthday, but hopefully should please enough
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Okay, I like the way flashbacks and present-time flow into and out of each other. And certain moments are pure gold shining out of what was already a pretty good story. (Shadowkittracey mentions one.)The whole general premise is... freaky, very freaky.
There's something especially poignant about a beaten Midnighter after Human on the Inside. That Midnighter would let Apollo get that punch in (even though it probably didn't hurt him) is disturbing. And I now I'm pondering character development based on that graphic novel and this story.
A few typos, as has been mentioned, but nothing that completely ruined the story.
I'm still having trouble spotting the damn typos. *is going tto wait for her brain to be working again*
I've only really flicked through Human On The Inside while standing around in Forbidden Planet, going it's sixteen bloody pounds, what else can I buy for sixteen bloody pounds?
Um... *scratches head* ...not sure. Last summer, I managed to get to the comic store about once a week or so. During the school year and this summer, I've only been able to go about once every month or two. That, and my pull list has increased within the last few months, plus my unfortunate tendency to pick up back issues that I probably don't need...
Well, I'm pretty sure it used to be about $20 last December, when I bought the book.
Okay, I like the way flashbacks and present-time flow into and out of each other. And certain moments are pure gold shining out of what was already a pretty good story. (Shadowkittracey mentions one.)The whole general premise is... freaky, very freaky.
There's something especially poignant about a beaten Midnighter after Human on the Inside. That Midnighter would let Apollo get that punch in (even though it probably didn't hurt him) is disturbing. And I now I'm pondering character development based on that graphic novel and this story.
A few typos, as has been mentioned, but nothing that completely ruined the story.
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I've only really flicked through Human On The Inside while standing around in Forbidden Planet, going it's sixteen bloody pounds, what else can I buy for sixteen bloody pounds?
I am all over freaky. *grins*
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It's even worse once you start translating it into sterling...
(doesn't want to thin about how much her pull list costs her)
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Well, I'm pretty sure it used to be about $20 last December, when I bought the book.
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Currently I have very little idea about how much I spend in that regard.
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