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Fic: Vizzini's Rule (90/105)

Nov 22, 2008 23:21

Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 90

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: It’s Sunday - and that means smut. :)

Spoilers: Season One thru Captain Jack Harkness (1x12)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around! All ©’s to Catherine Tregenna for dialogue and situations borrowed from ( Read more... )

fanfic, jack/ianto

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buttononthetop November 24 2008, 18:00:22 UTC

Wow! Thank you!! :D So glad you enjoyed it - hope you stick around for more! :o)

bookwrm89 November 23 2008, 06:56:48 UTC

I really liked this, but I'm holding my breath for the fallout from CJH. Just have a bad feeling about why Jack was so quiet while they were having sex....
Looking forward to more!

buttononthetop November 24 2008, 18:03:20 UTC

Oh yes, there will be fallout. :( And good call on Jack being quiet. Ianto will be bringing that up very soon...

Thanks!! :D

adafrog November 23 2008, 07:13:52 UTC

Wonderful.

buttononthetop November 24 2008, 18:03:35 UTC

Thank you! :)

criccieth November 23 2008, 08:09:54 UTC

hmmm- guilt muchm Jack? Let me see, what was it you said to the REAL Jack just a couple of hours ago? Oh yeah, how there was no-one waiting for you?

Going to be interesting to see Jack's attitude over the next day or so....and how Ianto responds when Tosh talks.

I'm interested in seeing what YOU see as Jack's reasons for denying Ianto when he spoke to the real Jack.

Been interesting reading these last few chapters - CJH is an odd sort of episode and I've enjoyed your take on it. Interesting how the man who hid the Cyberwoman and had the whole team accusing him of endangering the world is the one who tried to keep the Rift closed despite the personal pain; and the one who insisted loyalties should lie with Torchwood was the one to open it for entirely selfish reasons (not I don't see where Owen was coming from, though).

buttononthetop November 24 2008, 18:07:41 UTC

Oh yeah - that line is gonna come back to bite Jack on the arse here pretty soon. And I HOPE my Jack's explanations make sense to everyone. Lord knows I have NO CLUE why he'd say such an awful thing.

The role reversal between Owen and Ianto was really interesting between Cyberwoman and CJH. I had fun writing it.

Glad you're still reading and enjoying! Thanks so much!!

thememoryslides November 23 2008, 08:57:18 UTC

I'm so happy you updated. It was excellent. I'm not too sure how I feel about the sex in this chapter, it was hot no doubt, but it was kind of like Jack using Ianto to get over his grief which is disturbing to me. I don't know if thats how you intended it to be but I tend to be very protective of Ianto heh. I have many issues reguarding this episode and I don't think I will ever enjoy the Jack/Jack relationship and moments in the episode.

I really liked Jack taking care of Ianto when he has a panick attack and then in the shower. Very sweet. I cant help but wonder how Ianto will react when he finds out the truth about what Jack did in the past - in the last paragraph he is thankful that Jack is back but will that all change when he finds out the truth? meep. Im hanging onto the hedge of my seat and cant wait to find out.

buttononthetop November 24 2008, 18:13:11 UTC

Oh yes, that was exactly what I was going for - it's why Jack was so quiet, everything was just a little bit off. :) So YAY!! It worked!! :D

LOL - I'm totally protective of Ianto too. I don't know HOW I'm gonna write the time between Season 1 and Season 2 without having a meltdown. :(

Thanks so much!! :o)