Fic: Vizzini's Rule (85/105)

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Title:  Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 85

Rating:  R

Warnings:  Just some bad language

Spoilers:  Season One thru Captain Jack Harkness (1x12)

Disclaimer:  Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb.  Just goofin' around!  All ©’s to Noel Clarke for dialogue and situations borrowed from Combat and to Catherine

Comments

[laurapetri]

Owen's always such a smartarse

[buttononthetop]

Yep! He's fun to write. :D

[lambsendbeds]

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Boring????YOU?????????????????? Are you KIDDING???????????????

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Adore this. Ianto waking up with Jack still wrapped around him. Spending time together, Jack sharing more and more about Torchwood with Ianto. Gwen may have taken over as leader when Jack was gone but WE know who really kept things running,don't we?

A bunny came through the rift...this is why I love you.

I like the way you have Jack and Owen still at odds post Combat. It makes sense that it wouldn't just blow over. Jack taking out his anger on the firing range (changing the targets was a nice touch-poor Janet :( ) Jack turned down dinner(starving my Ianto again grrr)AND "distraction"...meep!

I love the unraveling of Owen from Ianto's POV here. And now...cue the plot...*unhappy sigh*

“Well it would be, wouldn’t it? S’got nothing to do with making coffee,” Owen said with a cruel smileI can't wait until Ianto shoots him

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OMG, hun, now THAT is a comment!! *huge grin*

Re: boring - it's just that you've heard so much of the dialogue before, that's my worry. *blushes* that you can't believe I could be boring. *hugs*

Re: bunny - hee! So glad you liked that bit!! :D

Re: dinner - don't worry, Ianto stopped off and picked up some sandwiches on the way home, I promise! ;)

Re: shooting - OMG LOVED writing that scene. :D

Re: angst - yep, it's a-comin' not much I can do about it. :( I'm kinda bummed that this fic is going to end on such a downer but that's what I get for being canon-girl!

Re: first comment - I'm sure you would have been first, but you wrote so much! ;D

*hugs* Thank you for all your lovely words!! *hugs*

[_miss_daisy_]

Stupid Owen! He needs to get his head out of his behind!

I like it so far hun! I can't wait for more! (especially the part where Ianto shoots Owen. I know that sounds weird, but the way he's looking at Owen in that scene and the way he holds himself and the gun... well I find something about that whole exchange really sexy! Okay, I'm going to stop now that I've given you more information than you probably wanted to know! LOL!) ;D

[morgia]

Huuum, this episode is not one of my favorite, its just I don't understand why Jack kiss Jack... Maybe its just something I didn't see well... But I'm very intriguing to read what you gonna write bout this ;)
Big hugs

[morgia]

Ouuuuups, sorry big day at school, I reply, I not wrote a new comment... But heuuu, hello miss_daisy, how are you tonight ? lol

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Oh hun, I don't think any of us Ianto fans understand why Jack kissed Jack. *shakes head*

There's a reason I don't write from Jack's point of view!! Hope you enjoy what I come up with! :D

[thrace_adams]

I'm with Morgia, I never really did get how he could fall so hard and so fast for Jack and KISS him when he had a perfectly good Ianto back home. Lovely chapter, really love the stuff with Owen, and I really like how Owen and Jack are still at odds with one another...lots of foreshadowing there :)

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Thanks hun! Yes - I am so glad I don't have to try to explain anything that Jack does. I'd go out of my mind writing from his point of view! :D

p.s. check your email in a sec... :D

[mercurychaos]

I never really saw it as really falling for him - I think is was half being infatuated ('cause he was definitely not hard on the eyes) and half knowing that the guy was about to die and being sad about it.

*shuts up now*

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Warning: Spoilers!
That's definitely one of the excuses Jack is going to use. :D

[cprefect]

Ianto you have the patience of a saint!

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LOL he sure does!! :D