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Betrayal (It Looks Bad On You) [5/16]

Jul 01, 2011 21:21

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kkailee July 2 2011, 04:23:46 UTC

illoveminho

illoveminho July 2 2011, 04:25:10 UTC

Its looks so much shorter compared to the others one you write. The ones that took me ages to read
Brb ♥

illoveminho July 2 2011, 05:18:27 UTC

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGmOMOMOMOMOMO! :DDDDDD OTS FINALLY HERE.
WHY ARE YOU MAKING JONGHYUN THE ABUSIVE ONE HERE?! *cries* My bias.... -.-

They all ran up to him, not to embrace him like he was hoping them to, but to kneel down and check out the new toys. Jonghyun stood, arms wide open, head tilted back with his eyes closed, waiting for the hugs that never came. Coughing awkwardly, he leaned down to join the kids.

Lol. Poooor Jjongie ♥

“Hyung… you’re hurting me, stop,” Kibum pleaded. He didn’t know what to do at this point. Jonghyun’s eyes were staring right into his blurring ones. He could feel himself choke up and his hot tears run out of his eyes. “Jonghyun… please… stop it ( ... )

kkailee July 2 2011, 05:21:47 UTC

i can't write good smut lol. look, i didn't go all the way with this one. but anyway, thanks for reading :3

illoveminho July 2 2011, 06:12:43 UTC

That's not what the Queen of Smut told me...:)

No. Thank YOU

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