Fic: Customs and Traditions (Doctor Who; Doctor/Rose; Universal Realignment 'verse)

Sep 14, 2008 13:51


Story Title: Customs and Traditions
Series Title: part of the Realignment universe
Author: butterfly
Summary: The Doctor and Rose make a couple of promises.
Pairing: Doctor/Rose
Rating: PG-13.
Warning: AU after Doctor Who 3x13 - "Last of the Time Lords". Some lines in the beginning are snagged from the end of "Last of the Time Lords", which was written by ( Read more... )

realignment, doctor who, fic

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helygen September 14 2008, 21:27:47 UTC
That's adorable. I absolutely love the ceremonial words, and the Doctor's nervousness is just delightful.

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butterfly September 15 2008, 03:33:32 UTC
Thank you!

The Doctor's nervousness around Rose is his cutest canon trait, I think. It's so adorable.

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shinyopals September 14 2008, 21:32:38 UTC
Fantastic! :-)

The end of LotTL scenes were very nicely done - recognisable as being part of canon but different enough to feel refreshed and not to be boring. (Particularly amused by how easily Rose got it and the Doctor didn't have a clue Martha was going to leave until she actually did.)

The ceremony itself was lovely - sweet and heartfelt and I love the idea of it being a promise of equals.

The teasing between them was nice and the banter was sweet. All in all, wonderful ficlet! :-)

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butterfly September 15 2008, 03:36:05 UTC
Thank you!

The end of LotTL scenes were very nicely done - recognisable as being part of canon but different enough to feel refreshed and not to be boring.

I'm really glad that worked for you. I wanted to transition Martha and Jack back into their canonical places but without being repetitive about it.

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milly September 14 2008, 21:51:21 UTC
Awww.

Is it wrong that I wish this had been the Children in Need special, and then whatever followed would have been the Christmas special post series 3?

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butterfly September 15 2008, 03:39:12 UTC
Thanks!

Is it wrong that I wish this had been the Children in Need special, and then whatever followed would have been the Christmas special post series 3?

I wouldn't mind either, especially with all the kissing! That's a really sweet thing to say.

(I've actually got some plot ideas for covering some of S4, but it's amazing how incredibly obvious it is, just looking at it, that things will be very different with Rose around)

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svanderslice September 14 2008, 22:33:06 UTC
Oh that's wonderful, like they've gone full circle. *sniff* Just lovely.

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butterfly September 15 2008, 03:39:55 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the story.

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mirageofmae September 14 2008, 23:39:45 UTC
Heh, I love this. Romantic and lovely and so very them. Looking forward to more adventures if you write any!!

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butterfly September 15 2008, 03:41:05 UTC
Thank you very much!

I'm actually currently looking through S4 and tinkering with some of the plots to see how they'd work with Rose there. We will see if anything comes of it.

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