Prison Break Fic: Romancing the Stone

May 11, 2008 09:23


Summary: He can't call it love. Admiration born of a single moment of affinity, yes, but not love. It's not love, he says to himself, it's not. Not at all. Not even close.
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pbhiatus_fic, prison break, paul kellerman, pb fic

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rosie_spleen May 11 2008, 08:11:07 UTC
As with many of the other readers of this fic, Nona, I love the entire section with the alluding to Caroline breaking the heart of Kellerman, with the sudden rush of Sara panic.

This is the best line of all for me:

By the time he’s sitting in her apartment eating dinner, the triteness of it all nearly bores him. He’d half-expected getting on the doctor’s good graces to be a challenge, and the effortlessness is a disappointment.

I love eppy 2x5, where they are eating in her apartment. I love the dialogue, I love when Frank visits, I love the 'skeletons' comment, I love their acting. They literally waft off each other, and it is the moment when I decided SWC and PA were my very favourites, even though I lusted for WM initially (and still do)

Thanks for writing this. Kellerman is such a unique character and I miss him. Good job of cliche, but your writing ability is nothing like a cliche. As always, you use of words and your PACING are so wonderful.

Funny, I imagine love and lust with these characters in the sickest regions of my mind *g*, even though you try to squish it in your cauldron...

yes, but not love. It’s not love, he says to himself, it’s not. Not at all. Not even close.

Thanks for writing.

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burntcircles May 11 2008, 14:47:33 UTC
Funny, I imagine love and lust with these characters in the sickest regions of my mind *g*, even though you try to squish it in your cauldron...

It's the chemistry. I may try to dispel it, but I will always fail. And that's wonderful. *flails*

Paul Adelstein is an excellent actor, isn't he? The lightning-quick changes in expression, the sarcasm, the cunning that just shines through...*sigh* The blue eyes don't hurt, too. *g*

Thanks, Rosie. Your generosity with your praise is greatly appreciated, since writing the M.B. highlights all sorts of weaknesses in my writing so much, my insecurity reached a new peak with this fic. *hugs you*

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