[1sentence]::Kekkaishi::YoshiToki.

Dec 24, 2008 09:30

Title: Jigsaw


Fandom: Kekkaishi
Pairing: Sumimura Yoshimori x Yukimura Tokine
Theme Set: Epsilon


Rating: G- mild R (for mentions of alcohol, the nasty and one or two innuendos)


Warning(s): Spoilers up to chap 220, random, may fluctuate from fluff to death, violent punctuation abuse

.01- Motion

Back to back, he smirks, all teeth, gums and ( Read more... )

writing, kekkaishi, manga, 1sentence, yoshitoki

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tenshiyaki December 24 2008, 15:46:44 UTC
Really cute fic! &hearts Thanks a lot for sharing and I look forward to more from you! :)

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burningpoultry December 25 2008, 02:29:45 UTC
Thanks! =D
Your comment really made my day.

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copper_sun December 30 2008, 19:29:02 UTC
There's not enough Tokine/Yoshimori fic in this world.

The cherry on the top was that your sentences were wonderfully heartfelt and sometimes painfully raw.

Thank you for sharing.

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burningpoultry January 10 2009, 16:01:48 UTC
Thanks for commenting.

The world would be a happier place if there was more yoshi/toki.
....and a bigger Kekkaishi fandom in general..

Your comment made me grin...(to the point that my mum asked if I was on anything).
But seriously, thanks for your comment. The way you said it was so.. ahh, I have no idea what or how to reply.
( but you flatter me, you awesome thing you.)
and I'm really, really glad you liked it. :D

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burningpoultry January 10 2009, 16:27:09 UTC
Ah, thanks :D
I was really nervous bout my first not-quite fanfic,
so the fact that you liked how i answered the prompts and portrayed the characters made me real happy. (its hard to get into their heads...and I was kinda afraid I couldn't pull it off...)

I'll churn out a Kekkaishi fic (not-so) soon, after Alive-the final evolution, library war and maybe DoGS. the lj community's real nice and you guys seriously flatter me.
(...Not that that's bad in anyway.)
oh you awesome people.

and thanks for taking your time to comment.
I really appreciate it. =)

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What? This is your first ever fanfic? dxoverdt January 11 2009, 05:42:28 UTC
OMG that was awesome! I like how we see flashes of action and emotion ping-ponging between past present and future.

I have been so starved of YoshiToki that this totally made my day. I hope to see more Kekkaishi fics from you in the future! XD

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Re: What? This is your first ever fanfic? burningpoultry January 27 2009, 11:17:43 UTC
i feel really bad for replying to your comment so late...
but you thought it was awesome? xD totally stoking my ego dude.

i'm kinda surprised that so many people liked it...and kekk's the first fandom i've ever written a fanfic for, so erm.. fics are on the way.

your review made me wanna do all sorts of emoticon-ing.
=) :D =]☺
...did i mention that you're made of awesome-sauce? cause yeah.

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jitsch March 3 2009, 16:27:14 UTC
It's impressive, more than anything else.
Even if it's not a "story", you are left with this feelings that grab you while reading this. It's kind of melancholic and epical, and this is what I like. It is like this "We can never go back" aspect that makes me sad.

Very well done. I really enjoyed reading.

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burningpoultry March 27 2009, 15:26:46 UTC
You know, for around five minutes I just sat there just re-reading your review and smiling like an idiot.

When i remembered how to type my went went blank.
"What can I say?..."
So basically, I fail. And I'm a dork. I'm a failing dork.
But anyway, I got out of my brain-funk.

And really? Thanks, dude. xD
Your review made me feel all kinda of awesome.
(And also a little big-headed.)

Hell, after reading this, I want to get off my bum and write something.
So thanks again, for taking your time to comment and for getting me out of my writer's slump.
you=awesome.
nuff said.

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