Winter Cinquain

May 01, 2007 16:43

Winter
Lily whitened
Washes, erases, resets
Forestalling the coming spring
Unwarmed

x-posted in
withhumanvoices. ("Autumn's Cinquain Challenge")
My attempt at a Cinquain... this is the original edit, the one that is closer to being right.   :D

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