H50 - Fanfic - Your breath is what revives me

[burned_phoenix]

Title: Your breath is what revives me
Author: burned_phoenix
Rating: PG-13 ?
Characters/Pairings: Steve McGarrett, Danny Williams, Kono Kalakaua, Chin Ho Kelly, mentions of Joe White, Mary-Ann McGarrett, Grace Williams and Rachel Edwards; pre-slash or strong bromance, you decide what you want
Spoilers/Universe: -
Wordcount: 1.811
Summary: Steve died on a

Comments

[dreamers_dh]

Wow!
My first H 5-0 and I really really liked it!
(though I kept thinking of goldfish... *giggles*)

Good work!!!

[burned_phoenix]

thanks, glad you did! :)

I have two more, I think, so far, if you ever wanna...

hehe, goldfish, yeah, no, kitties are next :D

[bombom_mamasita]

This was perfect. I don't even want to imagine what Danny and the others felt when they thought Steve was dead. And I assume they will Joe pay for all this unnecessary pain.

And aw Danny and Steve melt my heart

[burned_phoenix]

aww, thank you! :)

I'm kinda scared to read it again myself :D Danny almost broke me :D

glad you liked it, and thanks for letting me know! :)

[raeholland50]

This was brilliant, are there going to be more chapters?

[burned_phoenix]

thank you!! :)

there wasn't supposed to be more, but i've been getting ideas these last few hours... so I can't say for sure.

I want to finish a few WIPs first, and maybe I'll get back to this one after that, but I can't promise anything right now

[finduilas_clln]

Wonderful! I love fics where everyone thinks someone's dead but they aren't really. It makes for all the great angst, but still has a happy ending!

I loved it. Danny's reaction felt very very genuine!

[burned_phoenix]

I was gonna kill him for real, but then I just couldn't and had to turn the whole thing upside down :D

and yeah, I love fics like that too, they just give you everything you need if they are done right :)

I'm glad you think Danny's reaction was fitting. I was worried I wouldn't get him right, he's a very exhausting guy :D

thank you! :)

[simplyn2deep]

oh this was so good! and totally seems like something Joe would do. "For the greater good" and all that bs

[burned_phoenix]

thank you!! :)

it does, doesn't it? :D yeah, I'm not a fan of the guy :D wasn't font of the actor's character on LOST either *g*

he's a great actor, makes me hate him in everything I see him in it seems :D