FIC: Inherited Scars (Gen 1/1)

[buriedchild]

TITLE: Inherited Scars
AUTHOR: buriedchildRATING: PG/PG13 (Some tame violence and angst-o-rama

Comments

[buriedchild]

Thanks for reading. I like trying to dabble in the different.

[blueeyedliz]

I just wanted to say that I thought that was a beautiful one-shot, really beautiful. I loved your take on Sam's emotions - there was something sad and of 'screaming desperation which only comes out as a whisper' about the whole thing.

The bit about the mountains got to me....

Anyway I'm really glad I've read this because I've had writers' block for days and now I feel like writing again.

Great one-shot and I feel like that's an understatement.

Liz x

[buriedchild]

Im so glad you liked it. Yeah, writers block pretty much spawned this, so I can't wait to see what you're planning to write! Thanks for reading :)

[ficwriter1966]

That's lovely! The "voice" of it is so different, very quiet and introspective - makes for a very enthralling read. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

[buriedchild]

Thank you for reading! Im so glad you enjoyed it. Im new to this type of writing so im trying to find my form, i guess. Im glad its working.

[redrikki]

I really like the tone of this. It's all very detached and disjointed like Sam's watching his life from a distance and isn't quite sure what's going on or what he's feeling. It sort of makes us readers feel kind of like he does which is some pretty excellent literary technique.

[buriedchild]

Thank you for the thoughts and thanks for reading. Yes, I guess my idea of a teenage Sammy was a detached, introspective and depressed teenage Sammy...

:)

[quellefromage]

I love this story. I love the giraffes, and the kool-aid hair, and the mountains that no one can ever reach.

This is so very Sam.

Beautiful work.

[buriedchild]

I NEEEEED A better Sam icon. Like the one above. Im glad you like my story *blushes*