valentines

Feb 14, 2012 04:52

I didn’t know what to do on this day.

I knew people made cards--wasn’t doin’ that.

Wasn’t buying any, either. Save my money for better things.

I didn’t think he would have wanted something like that, anyhow. Didn’t seem like the professor. Sentimental and dripping with charm and enticement--nearly made me sick thinking on it.

That was my dilemma, ( Read more... )

fanfic, moran, moriarty, a game of shadows, sherlock holmes

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jcporter1 February 14 2012, 14:44:37 UTC
that was the sweetest Valentines Story ever! And of course so well written. I love the Jared Moriarty and his Moran. And of course the way you write it. putting in these details

Here’s the thing. If you want to live successfully doing what I do, you need to be able to do two things. You need to be able to properly blend into a crowd, to disappear at the drop of a hat if need be. You also needed to be able to threaten.

And mean it.

It did you no good to caution that you were going to break some man’s elbow if you didn’t believe it, and so I took a quick step forward. He stepped back reciprocally.

Just the kind of thing to make a story real and exciting and compelling. the details and motivations and intent of the characters.

Your dad is right you need to write many books.

Happy Valentines Day Dev. You're still the best writer I know.

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bunnymanders February 14 2012, 20:38:18 UTC
lol im always so wary when people say sweetest and its with moriarty and moran aha yar

ty then details are nice dhehd yar

lmao why ty

to you too but idk about THAT

yar

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koshartu February 15 2012, 05:31:27 UTC
I
LOVED
this

It's indeed sweet in a creepy way. And, hell, those seem like perfect gifts for Moriarty to me. Moran is a sap even though he doesn't want to admit it.

Great writing as usual!

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bunnymanders February 15 2012, 05:51:24 UTC
dhehd im glad you loved it i thought id do something for valentines day for them and then i surprised myself by actually following through.

lol yes moriarty was just being FICKLE bad moriarty. and facts lmfao but in a creepy way

and ty that means a lot you know dhehd yar

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