Fic | Learned How To Cut Off The Looser Ends

[bunnothun]

Title: Learned How To Cut Off The Looser Ends
Author: attilatehbun
Fandom: Young Avengers
Rating: PG
Pairings/Characters: Kate Bishop
Word Count: 1400+
Contains: references to canonical parental death
Summary: Kate exhales again and looses the arrow. This time it's slightly up and to the left. Maybe one day she'll stop overcompensating.
A/N: The problem with

Comments

[attilatehbun]

/blush Thank you so much! Some of this writing felt really abrupt, so I'm really happy to hear you liked it.

[pellucere]

Atti, this fic is wonderful. The way your words slide together is -- elegant, solid, beautiful. And I adore your take on Kate's character.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥, basically.

[attilatehbun]

Haha it is super hard for me to find Kate's voice for some reason. Everything comes out so terse and I'm just like a;ldka;l4rkuand KATE WHY U DO DIS

I am so so happy to know you liked it because OH MAN, just, oh man.

Thank youuuuuuuuu~~

[pellucere]

It's because Kate is controlled, I think? She doesn't, like, babble and flail around and the writing has to reflect that and ....... yes. Not easy when you are used to WILLIAM "BILLY" "WICCAN" "MISTER BIG MOUTH" KAPLAN.

OH MAN?? oh man. atti i don't even know why me liking this is a big thing i like every single fic of yours that i've read

[attilatehbun]

alsdkufa It's like. It's like. Billy is easy, because a good 75% of his issues are also mine. Teddy is also easy, because my issues that aren't Billy's are his, though he's still not as easy as Billy. But Kate! Kate is just like, askjdrh;a, she feels so totally alien to me. For every one thing about her that is familiar, there are like three other things that I just can't figure out how to get into, and I have no idea how to find her headspace.

And on top of that, she is so hard. Not hard like difficult, but hard like diamond. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

a;lsdkjfaala,kur shush i can't even aaaaaaaaa

[attilatehbun]

alskdjfa HOW DID I KNOW YOU WOULD PICK UP ON THAT THAT WAS ELI? HOW DID I KNOW?

screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaam thank you wifey ♥ ♥ ♥

[attilatehbun]

THEN ALL IS AS IT SHOULD BE

/nods

[balthaczar]

KATE BISHOP YOU GLORIOUS BAMF OMG I CAN'T ;_;
This is so perfect, the tone is wonderful and SO VERY KATE. ♥♥♥

[attilatehbun]

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFF Thank you so so much!

ohmygod people are liking this characterization what is happeninggggg

[duct_tape_fairy]

Lovely. I love the ending.

[attilatehbun]

Aaaaaaaaaaaa thank you thank you thank you!