FIC: Burn (Sam, Dean, PG-13)

[bungee]

Burn
Sam, Dean, PG-13, 1,865 words
Written for the First Time for Everything Chart Challenge at spn_challenges.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, and all characters depicted within are copyright The CW. No offense or copyright infringement is intended.

Comments

[aylaranzz]

Awwww. This was really good. I really liked it, you could really feel the emotions in this. You really get how protective Dean is of Sam in this. And I loved the imagery as well.

[bungee]

Thanks, hun! It's nice to know that someone on my flist is reading the stuff from my new fandom. :)

[embroiderama]

I really liked it! It's cool that it was written from Injured!Little!Sam's POV and thus limited to what he could perceive of the situation.

[bungee]

Thanks! I had fun writing it, trying to remember what it was like to be twelve and realizing that I hadn't a clue. :D

[northface11]

Oh, Dean. This is beautiful, and I can just see this happening. Sam seems so very twelve years old, confused by Dean's concern and tears. Both are very much in character. Good work!

[bungee]

Thank you! I'm glad you felt that they were in character, as that was one of my main concerns when writing this. :)

[hinter]

*loves* That was a nice look at young!Sam&Dean. Lovely fic.

[bungee]

Thank you very much. :)

[pheebs1]

I enjoyed this. I love wee winchester fics. I loved how you brought out how Sam looks up to Dean and thinks he isn't scared of anything, and doesn't quite get why Dean is so upset. And the end - very touching!

[bungee]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)