Rebel // 58 [Accidental Voice] Love Event! (forwarddated to tomorrow morning!)

Feb 13, 2011 21:21

[There's the sounds of scribbling; Noel is writing... something, but it doesn't show up on the journal.]

And... done! [She giggles knowingly to herself, stepping out of the chair with the other book and reading over what she wrote to herself.

Just kidding. Unsuspectingly and rather foolishly, she's going to read what she wrote out loud to no one ( Read more... )

oh my god i posted an entry, this was last minute, what am i doing, !flynn, noeru poemu

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[Voice] cry_camellia February 15 2011, 02:41:53 UTC
[BFF here to try and soften the blow.

...]

Don't be ashamed, Noel. You know, I can really see an improvement in this one.

[Not that in itself is any great feat.]

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[Voice] bullet_dance February 15 2011, 02:46:21 UTC
[Tsubaki, she knows you mean well, but... ;_;]

... R-Really? What is it?

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[Voice] cry_camellia February 15 2011, 02:53:41 UTC
[UM.]

Well, it's more... emotive. And it has more depth. I think it can be appreciated as a unique portrayal of the dark shadow looming over the joy of Valentine's Day that many poets are unwilling to explore, as embodied by the rather depressing man...?

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[Voice] bullet_dance February 15 2011, 02:57:20 UTC
[......]

I never thought of it like that. Maybe... Maybe it isn't so bad after all. [Screw Rachel. B|]

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[Voice] cry_camellia February 15 2011, 03:00:46 UTC
You should take more pride in your work. It's a lot easier for people to try to bring you down when they sense your own lack of confidence.

[Just don't go entering any poetry contests.]

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[Voice] bullet_dance February 15 2011, 03:04:25 UTC
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Tsubaki... thank you. You always know what to say to help cheer me up.

[Actually, she's just in love with Flynn. B|]

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