Look, I Can Flutter Better Than You Thought (4/?)

[intoxicatedbrat]

Title: Look, I Can Flutter Better Than You Thought (4/?)
Length: 1910 words
Rating: PG-13 (Sadistic themes)
Genre: Horror / Supernatural.
Pairing: Onew / Jonghyun (OnHyun)
Warning: Not for the faint-hearted?
Disclaimer: SHINee doesn’t belong to me. Original idea belonged to Tecmo, I just adapted it and added in a few ideas of my own.
Summary: The SHINee

Comments

[xxqod]

I leave a spot XD

[xxqod]

Gah!!!
I always get this heavy feeling in my stomach when I'm reading this. Probably because I don't know what to expect >.<
Gawds. Jonghyun's dreams are really getting the better of it. Really really anxious.

Don't worry about the Japanese, I think it's quite good. ^^
(Still in my first year, so I don't know much (well I do, but yeah..) )
Rushed... not at all, it's a nice pace. ^^

<3 ~~

[intoxicatedbrat]

^^
Really? Hohoho used whatever basic knowledge of Japanese i have and also an online translator. I dont trust online translators. :/
Ohh ok good to hear about the pacing. ^^;
Thanksss for following my fic! :D

[volatileflame]

omg!!! i'm so excited~!

[intoxicatedbrat]

>.<
me too!! XD

[intoxicatedbrat]

oh well then, hello!!
thank you so much~~
^^

[cracknut23]

Its not too rushy, It's fine! :D

And I sense a no-happy ending but I like sad ending /slaps self from Jonghyun's dreams! And reading this at 1.20am in the morning is definitely not a good idea, gives me chill, it's scary but awesome! ;D

AND KEY, HI KEY. When will Minho and Key make an official appearance? 8D

[intoxicatedbrat]

it's not? hehe ok then. X)

Lol it's more complicated than that~~
wait for it~ >.

[spacecadetluci]

laskfjs;fjdjk You, my dear, have got me completely hooooked on this story. AND YOU HAVE ME GOOGLING JAPANESE WORDS LIKE A CHAMP. LOL.

But that's okay- I need to get studying on that anyway. xD

But bravo! It's so well written and creeeepy and just uhnf. ♥

[intoxicatedbrat]

i... THANK YOU. >.<

lol the Japanese.. i kinda relied on an online translator. which i completely DO NOT TRUST.

but anw.
thanks~! :D