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like a phantasm or a horrible dream; jongkey; pg-15

May 03, 2011 01:35

Title: like a phantasm or a horrible dream
Length: 5674w
Rating: PG-15 (language, implied sex)
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key, Minho/Key
Disclaimer: Purely fiction. SHINee belongs to themselves/SME

Summary: Kibum had found a bottled ghost.

A/N: Happy Belated Birthday hoodedstarr! This is really late, I know. I'm surry ;~; But finally, I'm done! How did this even get so ( Read more... )

jongkey, fanfic, shinee

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ajin May 2 2011, 19:39:46 UTC

in my defence, i'm not creepy, just saw hoodedstarr going about this on my timeline...
*utterly defeated* my birthday present for her is nothing in comparison ;;

I wasn't so sure about this at the beginning but got hooked eventually. I wish it was actually longer. Bonus points for making me want to smash the bottle on Minho's head. I dislike him as it is so any additional dislike is welcome. Anyway, it was definitely very enjoyable. I loved the few moments when the atmosphere was becoming a bit creepy. It's a shame you didn't make the 'getting rid of the possession' part a bit longer and more detailed ._. Good thing you didn't abandon it though^^

eonjekkaji May 3 2011, 00:39:42 UTC

;~~~; what are you even saying??? i'm not expecting anything from you so s t o p

/rolls away

eonjekkaji May 3 2011, 00:40:03 UTC

o and ilu2 ok ^_^

ajin May 3 2011, 06:21:38 UTC

stfu u___u you deserve much more than my fail-y drawn cards. ur the family maknae after all ._.

eonjekkaji May 3 2011, 08:27:31 UTC

not shutting up e v e r you should know that better than anyone else and omg icon!!! ;~~~; i want a pair of dc marts too!

AND I LOVE YOUR CARDS EVEN IF THEY'RE FAIL AND RECEIVED THROUGH THE INTERWEB

):<

i'm not used to being the maknae actually. u gaiz dun even treat me like one!!

intoxicatedbrat May 3 2011, 01:38:06 UTC

o hai thurr @picaselle. okay so this isn't twitter, I know. :x

Urgh I know, there are so many things about this I don't really like. I had so many ups and downs with this fic, ydek. :c

Ahh yeah that last part. it was actually much much shorter originally, but I was told to make it longer. So it's already..longer..than how it was supposed to be. D: D:

mwurgh thank you for finding this enjoyable though! ;~~;

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