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bugz_aroc

If I Knew Then

Aug 04, 2010 18:45

Title: If I knew Then

Rating: T

Summary: Randy stared at John's profile in silence for a moment. He could practically hear the wheels turning in his lover's head. Knew he had taken that glorious trip down memory lane. Knew her phone call had only made things worse.

Warnings: AU'ish, Domestic-sort of, Character bashing.

Disclaimer: I own nothing and ( Read more... )

fic, centon

Comments 9

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bugz_aroc August 5 2010, 03:30:47 UTC

Thank you. I was a little worried I hadn't explained enough. Glad you enjoyed it.

legacychickno1 August 5 2010, 03:46:48 UTC

Really sweet one. Hope you think about writing more?!

It's good to read something non-sexual, non-fluff, something with just pure emotions for once.

bugz_aroc August 5 2010, 22:35:01 UTC

Thank you!

I guess I did kind of leave the ending open, lol. I think I do that a lot. I really liked this one, so yeah. It's a strong possibility.

zutarabeliever August 5 2010, 04:46:21 UTC

Loved it! You should do chapters of this, but then again I've always loved your writing! :)

bugz_aroc August 5 2010, 22:35:30 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

annemarie_blfan August 5 2010, 08:17:56 UTC

Great story! <3
And I have to agree with the others, you really should write more!
Thanks for writing! *hug*

bugz_aroc August 5 2010, 22:38:07 UTC

*returns hug*

Glad you enjoyed it. I can honestly say I enjoyed writing this a lot, so yeah, there's a strong possibility for more.

Thanks for reading!

angrbooa October 18 2010, 19:14:02 UTC

I was very skeptic about the whole kids-thing, but it turned out great in your fic.

So you can imagine how pissed off he was when he finally felt like he had gotten some sort of control over his feelings, guess who comes walking into John's life? Little Miss Princess. They'd met at some bar and blah, blah, blah. Randy didn't really give a fuck. She was infringing on his territory, dammit.
I love this. It's so Randy and so adorable.

"And don't even fix your mouth to lie to me." Randy growled right as John open his mouth, no doubt about to shrug off his lover's worries.
John flashed his dimples, shaking his head. Though they'd only been together for a year now, the previous eight years of friendship meant they could pretty much read each other like a book.
And this pretty much sums up what I love about Centon.