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FIC: The Care and Feeding of a Teenage Boy ~ Pt. 3

Mar 26, 2013 22:32

Title: The Care and Feeding of a Teenage Boy ~ 3
Author: bugs
Rating: T
Word Count: 1,500
Characters: Sharon, Rusty
Spoilers: Through Season One of Major Crimes; Set during MC 1.4: The Ecstasy and the Agony

( Her credit card groaned )

t, major crimes, vingette, sharon raydor, drama, ficlet

Comments 11

akachankami March 27 2013, 07:38:39 UTC

OMG i was going to bed and then THIS! *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
i love everything about it *-* sharon's menu and the family plan XD and rusty going through the pictures and then taking one of her ♥ awwwwwwwwwwww *happy*

bugsfic March 28 2013, 04:08:53 UTC

Well, my master plan is to deny you of any sleep...So... :D

lambrosia March 27 2013, 08:19:12 UTC

love this story to bits. You know how much I love your writing, this story is no exception. Their conversations are just perfect.

bugsfic March 28 2013, 06:36:56 UTC

I love just having them talk. :D

bsg_aussiegirl March 27 2013, 08:39:22 UTC

Awwwwww. Rusty does his homework like my kids. And they aren't teenagers! Ack! What is to come!?

I love the photos. I can just imagine poor Rusty's thoughts when he's looking at those other kiddies. *sniff* And he has a photo of Sharon and the squad's numbers. <3

Fatburger still sounds evil.

bugsfic March 28 2013, 06:45:28 UTC

Rusty does his homework like my kids.

I've been taking seekrit notes.

I can just imagine poor Rusty's thoughts when he's looking at those other kiddies. *sniff* And he has a photo of Sharon and the squad's numbers. <3

I'm thinking of Sharon's happy expression when she sees that he's texted while out with Daniel--phones are them!

Fatburger still sounds evil.

Oh, it is.

urania16 March 27 2013, 16:46:53 UTC

I love this story as these chapters could all be deleted scenes.
It describes so well the struggle these two must have had adapting to one another.
I love their conversations, I hear Sharon and I hear Rusty, you're so good at that!

bugsfic March 28 2013, 06:58:29 UTC

I keep reminding myself that I don't have to come up with a plot. Just show those moments. Trying to keep it simple!

k_d_456_345_a March 27 2013, 23:39:48 UTC

Aw, I love how you build to this small but significant moment: Rusty beginning his own family album.

bugsfic March 28 2013, 07:02:30 UTC

The terrible price of having a childhood like his would mean no photos or other connection to his past. Time to build his future.